Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are so many loose at my school. Students should wear uniforms every day and put and put school bags with some necessary books in their class. Also they are not allowed to wear take mobile phones because.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think students is benefit from rules such as they they wear uniforms every day. It promotes a fair and not allowance. It makes people more attention to his class.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my math teacher who is does his job very well. He always teaches us. He always takes a harsh thing with a simple way, simple way so we can understand it easily. He always make it make me make us interested in maths. So we love her very much.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意动词时态和搭配的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day and keep their school bags in the classroom. Also, mobile phones are not allowed during class time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不连贯,且内容不够具体。建议使用正确的主谓一致,避免重复,并且提供更具体的理由和例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from rules like wearing uniforms because it creates a sense of equality among students. Moreover, it helps students focus better in class without distractions.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,句子结构混乱,影响理解。建议简化句子,注意代词一致性,并用连贯的句子表达具体的教学方法和感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, my math teacher does his job very well. He explains difficult concepts in a simple way, which helps us understand easily. Because of his teaching style, we enjoy learning math and appreciate him a lot.
× Yes, there are so many loose at my school.
✓ Yes, there are so many rules at my school.
这里的 'loose' 是形容词,意思是松散的,不是名词。句子中需要名词 'rules'(规则)来表达意思。
× Students should wear uniforms every day and put and put school bags with some necessary books in their class.
✓ Students should wear uniforms every day and put their school bags with some necessary books in their classroom.
这里 'in their class' 应改为 'in their classroom',更准确地表达放置书包的地点。同时,重复了 'put and put',应去掉重复。
× Also they are not allowed to wear take mobile phones because.
✓ Also, they are not allowed to take mobile phones because of the rules.
'wear take mobile phones' 结构错误,应为 'take mobile phones'。此外,句子不完整,需补充原因。
× Yes, I think students is benefit from rules such as they they wear uniforms every day.
✓ Yes, I think students benefit from rules such as wearing uniforms every day.
'students' 是复数,谓语动词应为 'benefit' 而非 'is benefit'。此外,'such as they they wear uniforms' 结构重复且不正确,应改为 'such as wearing uniforms'。
× It promotes a fair and not allowance.
✓ It promotes fairness and equality.
'a fair and not allowance' 语法和表达均错误,应使用名词 'fairness' 和 'equality' 来表达公平和公正的意思。
× It makes people more attention to his class.
✓ It makes people pay more attention to their class.
'make attention' 用法错误,应为 'pay attention'。'his class' 应改为 'their class' 以匹配复数 'people'。
× Yes, my math teacher who is does his job very well.
✓ Yes, my math teacher does his job very well.
'who is does' 结构错误,应去掉 'who is',直接用 'does'。
× He always takes a harsh thing with a simple way, simple way so we can understand it easily.
✓ He always explains difficult things in a simple way so we can understand them easily.
'takes a harsh thing' 表达不当,应为 'explains difficult things'。重复 'simple way' 应去掉。
× He always make it make me make us interested in maths.
✓ He always makes it interesting and makes us interested in math.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加 's',即 'makes'。句子结构混乱,需调整表达。
× So we love her very much.
✓ So we love him very much.
前文提到的是 'he',数学老师是男性,代词应为 'him'。