Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. There are some rules at my schools late on daily regulations about like school schedule or rules in the dormitory. Yeah, something like that.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I definitely, because you know, only if we set up, set rules for students can they be more, you know, like disciplined and they will behave, behave more.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. One of my biology teachers, she just does her job very well. You know, she teaches biology very well and very clearly and easily understood and I.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在错误,且内容较为模糊。建议回答时直接说明学校的具体规则,并使用完整且正确的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must follow the school schedule strictly and maintain quiet in the dormitory to ensure a good study environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和口语化表达,缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用连接词组织句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think more rules would help students. Because with clear rules, students can become more disciplined and behave better in school.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达重复,缺少具体细节。建议完整表达观点,增加具体描述,并使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. One of my biology teachers does her job very well because she explains complex topics clearly and makes the lessons easy to understand.
× There are some rules at my schools late on daily regulations about like school schedule or rules in the dormitory.
✓ There are some rules at my school, like daily regulations about the school schedule or rules in the dormitory.
这里'schools'应为单数形式'school',因为指的是学生所在的单一学校。复数形式在此处不合适。
× There are some rules at my schools late on daily regulations about like school schedule or rules in the dormitory.
✓ There are some rules at my school, like daily regulations about the school schedule or rules in the dormitory.
句子结构混乱,'late on'用法错误,应删除,'about like'搭配不当,应改为'like'引导举例。
× Yes, I definitely, because you know, only if we set up, set rules for students can they be more, you know, like disciplined and they will behave, behave more.
✓ Yes, definitely, because you know, only if we set up rules for students can they be more disciplined and behave better.
句子中重复使用'behave',且表达不流畅,应简化为'behave better',使句子更自然。
× Yes, definitely. One of my biology teachers, she just does her job very well. You know, she teaches biology very well and very clearly and easily understood and I.
✓ Yes, definitely. One of my biology teachers just does her job very well. You know, she teaches biology very clearly and understandably.
'very clearly and easily understood'搭配不当,应改为副词形式'clearly'和'adverb'形式'ununderstandably',使表达更准确。