Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is very brief and lacks detail. To improve, try to provide a direct response followed by specific examples or reasons. Also, avoid one-word or very short answers to make your response more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms, being punctual, and respecting teachers and classmates.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but can be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural. For example, instead of repeating 'students can be benefited', you can combine ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Definitely, students would benefit from more rules because they help develop self-discipline and encourage respect for teachers and classmates. Moreover, such rules can help students focus better on their studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. To improve, use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, my accountancy teacher does his job very well. He helps me overcome my fear of the subject by explaining concepts clearly, and he often tells jokes to create a friendly learning environment.

× Definitely, the students would benefit more from school rules as they will become self disciplined and they have to follow the instructions carefully.

✓ Definitely, the students would benefit more from school rules as they would become self-disciplined and they would have to follow the instructions carefully.

The sentence mixes modal verbs 'would' and 'will' inconsistently. Since the sentence is conditional and hypothetical, 'would' should be used consistently to express future in the conditional mood. Also, 'self disciplined' should be hyphenated as 'self-disciplined' as it is a compound adjective.

× On the other hand, the students can be benefited from the rules by focusing on better on studies and they have to respect the teachers and students as well.

✓ On the other hand, the students can benefit from the rules by focusing better on their studies and they have to respect the teachers and students as well.

The phrase 'can be benefited' is incorrect; 'benefit' is an active verb and should be used as 'can benefit'. Also, 'focusing on better on studies' is incorrect; it should be 'focusing better on their studies' to correctly place the adverb and possessive pronoun.

× He tell me about how I can overcome my fear of accountancy and he tell tells very much jokes in the class so that the learning environment becomes better.

✓ He tells me about how I can overcome my fear of accountancy and he tells many jokes in the class so that the learning environment becomes better.

The verb 'tell' needs to be in third person singular form 'tells' to agree with the subject 'He'. Also, 'very much jokes' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'many jokes' for countable nouns like 'jokes'.