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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many rules in my school. I don't have to do this or do that because it can to regular our our activity activity.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think it is benefit because more rules can to control the students more. It cannot benefit for the students to grow up with themselves for themselves. Thank you.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think my good Jelly married teacher he is she is very good. She touched me many English of study technology I think is very good and he teach me a lot of her thing about the English.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在错误,导致意思不明确。建议你直接回答问题,并用简单明了的句子说明学校的规则,同时避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and attend classes on time. These rules help maintain order and create a good learning environment.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不流畅,语法错误较多,且内容不够具体。建议你用更准确的句子表达观点,并给出理由支持你的看法。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help students. Too many rules might limit their freedom and make it hard for them to develop independence and responsibility.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答语法混乱,表达不清楚,缺乏连贯性。建议你先明确回答问题,然后用简单句子具体描述这位老师的优点和对你的帮助。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is my English teacher and she explains difficult topics clearly. She also encourages me to practice speaking, which helps me improve a lot.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I don't have to do this or do that because it can to regular our our activity activity.

I don't have to do this or do that because it can regulate our activities.

错误在于动词后错误使用了不定式结构“to regular”,正确用法是动词原形“regulate”。此外,重复了单词“our”和“activity”,应改为复数形式“activities”。动词后接动词原形而非不定式。

Verb + -ing form

× No, I don't think it is benefit because more rules can to control the students more.

No, I don't think it is beneficial because more rules can control the students more.

“benefit”作为形容词应使用“beneficial”,且动词“can”后应接动词原形“control”,而非不定式“to control”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It cannot benefit for the students to grow up with themselves for themselves.

It cannot benefit the students to grow up by themselves.

“benefit”后不需要介词“for”,且“grow up with themselves for themselves”表达不自然,正确表达是“grow up by themselves”,表示“自己独立成长”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think my good Jelly married teacher he is she is very good.

Yes, I think my good teacher Jelly is very good.

句中“he is she is”重复且混乱,且“Jelly married teacher”结构不清晰,应简化为“my good teacher Jelly”。避免重复使用主语代词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× She touched me many English of study technology I think is very good and he teach me a lot of her thing about the English.

She taught me many English study techniques. I think she is very good and she teaches me a lot about English.

“touched me many English of study technology”表达错误,应为“taught me many English study techniques”。“he teach me”主语和动词不一致,应为“she teaches me”。句子结构混乱,需调整使表达清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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