Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes, they are many rules. In my school, for example 1 you must wear a scrub and lab coat every day and we mustn't.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do because because it very clear when when you studying studying university, when you when you any rules in university.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my teacher Nora, she is teach me reading and vocabulary. She is very quietly and she is answer me when I was I was ask her. She's very cute and and I am very very smart when I was.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً وطبيعية، وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة مع تفاصيل محددة. على سبيل المثال، اذكر بعض القواعد المهمة بشكل واضح دون تكرار الكلمات.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear scrubs and lab coats every day. Also, we are not allowed to use mobile phones during class. These rules help maintain discipline and safety.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: حاول أن تعبر عن رأيك بشكل واضح ومنظم، وتجنب التكرار. استخدم جمل مترابطة مع توضيح السبب بشكل مفصل وبسيط.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because clear guidelines help us focus better. For example, at university, rules about attendance and assignments make studying more organized.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: حاول أن تصف المعلمة بشكل أكثر دقة ووضوح، وتجنب التكرار والأخطاء النحوية. استخدم جمل مترابطة مع تفاصيل محددة عن طريقة تدريسها وتأثيرها عليك.
Ví dụ: Yes, my teacher Nora teaches me reading and vocabulary. She is very patient and always answers my questions. Thanks to her, I have improved my English skills a lot.
× Yes, yes, they are many rules.
✓ Yes, yes, there are many rules.
The phrase 'they are many rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and requires the existential 'there are' instead of 'they are'. The correct form is 'there are many rules'. This is a common mistake with 'there be' constructions.
× In my school, for example 1 you must wear a scrub and lab coat every day and we mustn't.
✓ In my school, for example, you must wear scrubs and a lab coat every day, and we mustn't wear anything else.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Scrub' should be plural 'scrubs' because it refers to clothing. Also, the phrase 'and we mustn't' is incomplete; it needs an object or complement. Adding 'wear anything else' clarifies the meaning. Proper punctuation and conjunction use improve clarity.
× Yes, I do because because it very clear when when you studying studying university, when you when you any rules in university.
✓ Yes, I do because it is very clear when you are studying at university, especially when you have rules there.
The sentence contains repeated words and lacks proper verb forms. 'Because because' and 'when when' are repetitions. 'Studying' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form present continuous tense. Also, 'when you any rules' is incomplete; it should be 'when you have rules'. Preposition 'at' is used with 'university'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.
× Yes, my teacher Nora, she is teach me reading and vocabulary.
✓ Yes, my teacher Nora, she teaches me reading and vocabulary.
The verb 'teach' needs to be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. The auxiliary 'is' is unnecessary here and should be removed.
× She is very quietly and she is answer me when I was I was ask her.
✓ She is very quiet and she answers me when I ask her.
'Quietly' is an adverb, but the sentence requires the adjective 'quiet' to describe 'she'. Also, 'she is answer me' is incorrect; it should be 'she answers me' in present simple tense. The phrase 'when I was I was ask her' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'when I ask her'.
× She's very cute and and I am very very smart when I was.
✓ She's very cute and I was very smart.
The phrase 'and and I am very very smart when I was' is confusing and ungrammatical. The repetition 'and and' should be corrected to a single 'and'. The tense inconsistency between 'I am' and 'when I was' should be resolved. Assuming past tense, 'I was very smart' is correct.