Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, my school have several roles for students. For example, have strict regulations about wearing uniforms and boys are required to keep their hair short. These rules help maintain discipline and create a positive learning environment where everyone can focus on their studies.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on the type of rules. For instance, having rules about uniforms can benefit students by promoting equality and reducing distractions, which helps them focus better on their studies. However, too many strict regulations can make students feel restrained and less motivated to learn.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have several teachers who do their job very well. For example, my maths teacher is very funny and approachable, which means that students feel comfortable asking questions without hesitation. She explained difficult concepts clearly and is always patient.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'have several roles' nên là 'have several rules'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng điểm. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài, bạn nên giữ trong 5 câu và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules for students. For example, there are strict regulations about wearing uniforms, and boys must keep their hair short. These rules help maintain discipline and create a positive learning environment, so everyone can focus on their studies.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và nội dung rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một câu mở đầu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để tăng điểm.
Ví dụ: It depends on the type of rules. For example, rules about uniforms can promote equality and reduce distractions, helping students focus better. However, too many strict regulations might make students feel restricted and less motivated to learn.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có ví dụ cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên chú ý thì động từ để câu văn chính xác hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have several teachers who do their job very well. For instance, my maths teacher is very funny and approachable, so students feel comfortable asking questions without hesitation. She explains difficult concepts clearly and is always patient.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes, my school have several roles for students.
✓ Yes, my school has several rules for students.
The subject 'school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'roles' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'rules'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct word usage.
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