Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami, hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'uh' dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide. Misalnya, jelaskan aturan dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan spesifik.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a uniform every day. In addition, we are not allowed to be late on weekends, which helps maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari pengulangan kata. Jelaskan pendapat dengan alasan yang jelas dan gunakan linking words untuk memperjelas hubungan antar ide.

Ví dụ: I believe it depends on the type of rules the school enforces. However, if the rules are too strict, they might limit students' creativity and freedom to express themselves.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih positif dan jelaskan alasan dengan detail yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific teacher who stands out, as I faced challenges in all my schools. However, I am grateful to all my teachers because their guidance helped me become stronger in the end.

× Yes, of course there are rules for the student.

✓ Yes, of course there are rules for the students.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because the sentence refers to rules applying to multiple students, not just one.

× Uh, back then when I was at school, uh, there were primary rules is we students have to wear a uniform, uh, for going to school.

✓ Back then, when I was at school, the primary rule was that we students had to wear a uniform to go to school.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and verb agreement. 'There were primary rules is' is incorrect; it should be 'the primary rule was'. Also, 'have to wear' should be in past tense 'had to wear' to match the past time frame.

× Another example of rules is we don't uh, weekend late at all.

✓ Another example of rules is we don't stay out late on weekends at all.

The phrase 'weekend late' is incorrect. The correct preposition and phrase is 'stay out late on weekends' to express the intended meaning.

× I think it depends on the rules that applied by the school, but actually a more tight the tighter the rules will will restrict students from being creative, you know?

✓ I think it depends on the rules applied by the school, but actually, the tighter the rules are, the more they restrict students from being creative, you know?

The sentence has incorrect word order and redundant words ('will will'). The phrase 'a more tight the tighter' is incorrect; it should be 'the tighter'. Also, 'rules that applied by the school' should be 'rules applied by the school'.

× No, not really because my high school was bad, my junior high school was bad, so do my elementary school but I still thankful for them because they make me stronger at the end.

✓ No, not really, because my high school was bad, my junior high school was bad, and so was my elementary school, but I am still thankful for them because they made me stronger in the end.

The phrase 'so do my elementary school' is incorrect; it should be 'and so was my elementary school' to maintain tense and structure. Also, 'I still thankful' is missing the verb 'am'. 'They make me stronger at the end' should be past tense 'made me stronger in the end' to match the past context.