Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes there are many rules in my school that students need to follow. Umm firstly student need to be study hard and student should not play the phone in the class. Student should also listen to teacher and respect teacher and know how to respect other students also.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I believe that having more rules can help students get more, get more personality that help them to be a good student and also study hard, listen to teacher and have a good responsibility and good it's good for them.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a teacher who does his job really well. He's my math teacher and his teacher very good and I really like when he teaching us and it's good. I understand well and I really appreciate that he's teaching it very good and clearly.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answers more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'Umm' and using correct grammar. For example, say 'Students need to study hard' instead of 'student need to be study hard'. Also, use linking words like 'Firstly' and 'Additionally' to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school that students must follow. Firstly, students need to study hard. Additionally, they should not use their phones in class. They must also listen to and respect their teachers, as well as respect other students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), focus on making your sentences clear and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your reasons. For example, instead of saying 'get more, get more personality', say 'develop better personality traits'. Also, try to organize your ideas logically.
Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules can help students develop better personality traits because it encourages them to study hard, listen to teachers, and be responsible. So, more rules are good for students' growth.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your feelings. For example, instead of repeating 'good', use synonyms like 'excellent' or 'clear'.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a math teacher who does his job very well. I like his teaching because he explains the lessons clearly, so I understand the material easily. I really appreciate his excellent teaching style.
× Umm firstly student need to be study hard and student should not play the phone in the class.
✓ Umm firstly students need to study hard and students should not play with their phones in the class.
The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to more than one student. Also, 'need to be study' is incorrect; it should be 'need to study'. Additionally, 'play the phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'play with their phones'. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to multiple students and correct verb forms.
× Student should also listen to teacher and respect teacher and know how to respect other students also.
✓ Students should also listen to the teacher, respect the teacher, and know how to respect other students as well.
The subject 'Students' is plural, so the verb 'should' is correct, but 'teacher' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'know how to respect other students also' is better phrased as 'know how to respect other students as well'. Suggestion: Use definite articles with specific nouns and improve sentence flow.
× Student should also listen to teacher and respect teacher and know how to respect other students also.
✓ Students should also listen to the teacher, respect the teacher, and know how to respect other students as well.
The modal verb 'should' is used correctly here, but the sentence needs definite articles and better phrasing for clarity. Suggestion: Ensure proper articles and sentence structure when using modal verbs.
× I believe that having more rules can help students get more, get more personality that help them to be a good student and also study hard, listen to teacher and have a good responsibility and good it's good for them.
✓ I believe that having more rules can help students develop better personalities that help them to be good students, study hard, listen to the teacher, and have good responsibility. It's good for them.
The phrase 'get more, get more personality' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'develop better personalities' is clearer. 'Help them to be a good student' should be plural 'good students' to match 'students'. Also, 'listen to teacher' needs 'the teacher'. The sentence is long and needs to be broken down for clarity. Suggestion: Use clear expressions and maintain subject-verb agreement in present tense.
× Yes, I have a teacher who does his job really well.
✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his job really well.
This sentence is correct; the verb 'does' agrees with the singular subject 'teacher'. No correction needed.
× He's my math teacher and his teacher very good and I really like when he teaching us and it's good.
✓ He's my math teacher and he is very good. I really like it when he teaches us, and it's good.
'His teacher very good' is incorrect; it should be 'he is very good'. 'He teaching us' should be 'he teaches us' to match present tense third person singular. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms for third person singular and proper sentence structure.
× He's my math teacher and his teacher very good and I really like when he teaching us and it's good.
✓ He's my math teacher and he is very good. I really like it when he teaches us, and it's good.
The phrase 'he teaching us' incorrectly uses the present participle; it should be 'he teaches us' for simple present tense. Suggestion: Use simple present tense for habitual actions with third person singular subjects.
× I understand well and I really appreciate that he's teaching it very good and clearly.
✓ I understand well and I really appreciate that he's teaching it very well and clearly.
'Very good' is an adjective, but here it modifies the verb 'teaching', so the adverb 'very well' should be used instead. Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs for correct grammar.