Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Of course, there are many rules for students need to obey I in my school, such as we cannot be late for school and we should always do our homework on time.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
To be honest, as a Chinese student, there are many rules for us that we need to obey, but in fact, in my opinion, I really want to break some rules to let my brain and the thought to be more flexible and more.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
I do believe that I have many teachers that they can complete their work very well, such as my English teacher. He always treat me that to be confident and do not lose my confidence in everything. In fact, he always believe me that I can do well.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“students need to obey I”不符合英语语法。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的语法,并避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not be late and should always complete their homework on time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱,且缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议使用更简洁明确的句子,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I think having too many rules can be restrictive. Sometimes, breaking a few rules can help students think more creatively and flexibly.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“treat me that to be confident”不正确。建议使用正确的动词和句型,表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a great English teacher who always encourages me to be confident and believe in myself. He supports me to do my best in everything.
× Of course, there are many rules for students need to obey I in my school, such as we cannot be late for school and we should always do our homework on time.
✓ Of course, there are many rules for students that need to be obeyed in my school, such as we cannot be late for school and we should always do our homework on time.
句子中“students need to obey I”结构不正确,缺少连接词且“I”位置错误。应使用“students that need to be obeyed”来表达“学生需要遵守的规则”。这里涉及复数名词和从句结构的正确使用。
× To be honest, as a Chinese student, there are many rules for us that we need to obey, but in fact, in my opinion, I really want to break some rules to let my brain and the thought to be more flexible and more.
✓ To be honest, as a Chinese student, there are many rules for us that we need to obey, but in fact, in my opinion, I really want to break some rules to make my brain and thoughts more flexible.
句中“to let my brain and the thought to be more flexible and more”表达不自然,动词搭配错误。应使用“to make my brain and thoughts more flexible”更符合英语习惯。这里涉及情态动词和动词搭配的正确使用。
× He always treat me that to be confident and do not lose my confidence in everything.
✓ He always treats me to be confident and not to lose my confidence in everything.
主语“He”是第三人称单数,谓语动词“treat”应加-s变为“treats”。此外,句中“that to be confident”结构不正确,应改为“to be confident”。
× In fact, he always believe me that I can do well.
✓ In fact, he always believes me that I can do well.
主语“He”是第三人称单数,谓语动词“believe”应加-s变为“believes”。这里涉及主谓一致和情态动词的正确使用。