Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
There are quite few rules in my school. Some of them include wearing knee length dresses for girls and proper trousers for boys. The hair length for boys should be around 1 inches. Honey.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think rules are necessary to maintain a discipline. The more rules might be.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I know quite a few teachers that does their job quite very well. They are very punctual, they teaches very well, they maintain.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the last word 'Honey' which seems out of place. Try to give a clear and complete response with proper sentence structure and avoid unnecessary or confusing words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, girls must wear knee-length dresses, and boys are required to wear proper trousers. Additionally, boys should keep their hair around one inch long. These rules help maintain a neat appearance among students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to finish your sentences and explain your opinion clearly. Use linking words to support your ideas and provide reasons or examples to make your answer more effective.
Ví dụ: No, I don't think having more rules would benefit students. In fact, too many rules might make students feel restricted and less motivated. Instead, a few important rules are enough to maintain discipline effectively.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Use correct subject-verb agreement and complete your sentences. Also, provide specific details about what makes these teachers good, using linking words to connect your points.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have several teachers who do their jobs very well. For instance, they are always punctual and explain lessons clearly. Moreover, they maintain discipline in the classroom, which helps students learn better.
× There are quite few rules in my school.
✓ There are quite a few rules in my school.
The phrase 'quite few' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a few' to indicate a considerable number. 'Quite a few' means many, whereas 'quite few' is not standard English.
× The hair length for boys should be around 1 inches.
✓ The hair length for boys should be around 1 inch.
When referring to a singular measurement, the unit should be singular ('inch' not 'inches'). Also, 'around' is correctly used here to indicate approximation.
× The more rules might be.
✓ More rules might not be necessary.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a main verb and object. The corrected sentence completes the thought, making it grammatically correct and meaningful.
× Yes, I know quite a few teachers that does their job quite very well.
✓ Yes, I know quite a few teachers that do their job very well.
The subject 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does'. Also, 'quite very well' is redundant; 'very well' suffices.
× They are very punctual, they teaches very well, they maintain.
✓ They are very punctual, they teach very well, and they maintain discipline.
The verb should agree with the plural subject 'they', so 'teaches' should be 'teach'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'discipline' completes the thought.