Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a variety of rules for for the student. In my school, for example, students have to wear uniforms when they go to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Uh, in years they felt likely, uh, because uh, uh, if, umm, if the student is the student practical practice rules of your school, uh, they, they can, umm, fair play.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a teacher who teach me a English. She is a very supportive and knowledgeable. She often supports me and collecting a meal with.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và câu hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, all students must wear uniforms every day. Additionally, we are required to be punctual and respect our teachers.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều tiếng ừm và lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên luyện tập để trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I think having more rules can help students behave better because rules guide us to act fairly and responsibly. However, too many rules might make students feel restricted.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về giáo viên để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have an English teacher who is very supportive and knowledgeable. She always helps me understand difficult topics and encourages me to improve my skills.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes, there are a variety of rules for for the student.
✓ Yes, there are a variety of rules for the students.
The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because the sentence refers to rules applying to multiple students, not just one.
× I have a teacher who teach me a English.
✓ I have a teacher who teaches me English.
The verb 'teach' must be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher'. Also, 'a English' is incorrect; 'English' is a language and does not need an article.
× She is a very supportive and knowledgeable.
✓ She is very supportive and knowledgeable.
The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjectives 'supportive and knowledgeable'. When using multiple adjectives without a noun, the article should be omitted.
× She often supports me and collecting a meal with.
✓ She often supports me and collects a meal with me.
The verb 'collecting' should be in the simple present form 'collects' to match 'supports'. Also, the preposition 'with' needs an object, so 'with me' is added for clarity.
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