Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise and natural. For example, mention a specific rule and explain it briefly.

Ví dụ: I am not a student anymore, but I remember that in my primary school, we had to arrive by 10 AM every day. This rule helped us be punctual and prepared for classes.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words. Use simple and correct vocabulary to explain your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because rules help them stay focused on their studies. Moreover, discipline from both school and parents encourages better learning habits.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the teacher's qualities or why you admire him. Avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher named Dholav Dhola Bhai in 2019 who did his job very well. He was very supportive and knowledgeable, which helped me understand difficult subjects easily.

× As I am not a student now, I, I, I, I, I don't know the concern of the high school, but as far as I remember my childhood school memories, which was, which was my primary school there, we, we go there within 10 AM we had to go there.

✓ As I am not a student now, I don't know the rules of the high school, but as far as I remember from my childhood school memories, which was my primary school, we had to go there by 10 AM.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and awkward phrasing. 'We go there within 10 AM' is incorrect; it should be 'we had to go there by 10 AM' to indicate past obligation. Also, redundant phrases and filler words like repeated 'I' and 'which was' are removed for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I think obviously it's French I should bind within the rules. Otherwise they they would be distracted on their study story books. They needed discipline life and if parents and confirm their discipline.

✓ Yes, I think obviously students should follow the rules. Otherwise, they would be distracted from their study and story books. They need a disciplined life, and parents should confirm their discipline.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and has unclear expressions. 'I should bind within the rules' is incorrect; it should be 'students should follow the rules'. 'Distracted on their study story books' should be 'distracted from their study and story books'. Also, 'needed discipline life' should be 'need a disciplined life'. The sentence is corrected for proper modal verb use and clearer meaning.

× Yes, I I think I I I really GI give an example who was my as instructor in 2019. His name is Dholav Dhola bhai. He is also currently he is also doing a job in a pragmatist also he is an mentor and I I.

✓ Yes, I think I can give an example. He was my instructor in 2019. His name is Dholav Dhola Bhai. He is currently working as a pragmatist and is also a mentor.

The original sentence has repeated pronouns and unclear references. 'I really GI give an example who was my as instructor' is incorrect; it should be 'I can give an example. He was my instructor'. Also, 'he is also doing a job in a pragmatist' is unclear and corrected to 'he is currently working as a pragmatist'. Pronouns are clarified and unnecessary repetitions removed.