Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules for studying at my school, but like studying, when students step into our school, they must wear their own uniform or they can't wear sports uniform when they stop.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think maybe not, although rules maybe is good for a teacher or good for a student to follow. However, rules can make students have less freedoms.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think my Chinese teacher is does her job very well. She is willing to teach students and told each student what is their weakness of Chinese and their writing. So I think she does her job well.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达有些混乱,建议简洁明了地说明学校的规则,并避免重复和不连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear their school uniform at all times and are not allowed to wear sports uniforms outside of sports activities.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达观点时语法和用词不够准确,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I don't think more rules would benefit students. Although rules help maintain order, too many rules can limit students' freedom and creativity.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子结构有误,表达不够流畅,建议注意语法和时态的正确使用,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, my Chinese teacher does her job very well. She patiently explains difficult topics and gives each student personalized feedback on their weaknesses in Chinese and writing skills.
× Yes, there are many rules for studying at my school, but like studying, when students step into our school, they must wear their own uniform or they can't wear sports uniform when they stop.
✓ Yes, there are many rules for studying at my school, but like studying, when students step into our school, they must wear their own uniform or they can't wear sports uniform when they stop.
该句中“like studying”用法不明确,可能想表达“比如学习时”,但语法上不正确。建议改为更清晰的表达,如“such as when studying”。但根据指示只纠正列出的语法问题,此处不属于列表中的错误,因此不做修改。
× Yes, there are many rules for studying at my school, but like studying, when students step into our school, they must wear their own uniform or they can't wear sports uniform when they stop.
✓ Yes, there are many rules for studying at my school, but like studying, when students step into our school, they must wear their own uniform or they can't wear sports uniform when they stop.
句中使用了情态动词“must”和“can't”,用法正确,无需修改。
× I think maybe not, although rules maybe is good for a teacher or good for a student to follow.
✓ I think maybe not, although rules may be good for a teacher or good for a student to follow.
“maybe”是副词,不能直接用作情态动词,应改为“may be”表示可能性。
× However, rules can make students have less freedoms.
✓ However, rules can make students have less freedom.
“freedom”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“freedoms”,应使用单数形式。
× Yes, I think my Chinese teacher is does her job very well.
✓ Yes, I think my Chinese teacher does her job very well.
“is does”是错误的动词形式,第三人称单数应直接用“does”,去掉“is”。
× She is willing to teach students and told each student what is their weakness of Chinese and their writing.
✓ She is willing to teach students and tells each student what their weaknesses in Chinese and their writing are.
“told”时态不一致,应与前半句保持现在时;“what is their weakness”结构不正确,应改为“what their weaknesses are”;“weakness”应为复数“weaknesses”以匹配“their”。
× So I think she does her job well.
✓ So I think she does her job well.
句子语法正确,第三人称单数动词“does”使用正确,无需修改。