Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và logic hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt thừa.

Ví dụ: At my school, there are several rules. For instance, we must wear uniforms every day because it shows our identity and professionalism. Also, using phones during lessons is prohibited as it causes distractions.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hơn để minh họa quan điểm của mình.

Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules can help students develop responsibility and better behavior. For example, clear rules encourage discipline and respect in class. However, if there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and less motivated to express themselves.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. Her name is Ms. Smith. She encourages responsibility among her students and always speaks clearly. Moreover, her lessons are very engaging, so we really enjoy learning from her.

× There are several rules as my school like we must still wear uniforms every day because it will express our identity and professional needs and professional.

✓ There are several rules at my school, like we must still wear uniforms every day because it expresses our identity and professionalism.

The preposition 'as' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition to indicate location or association is 'at'. Also, 'professional needs and professional' is unclear and redundant; 'professionalism' is a better noun form here. Additionally, 'it will express' should be 'it expresses' to match the present tense context.

× Additionally, we are not allowed to use my phone during the lesson because it will distraction and.

✓ Additionally, we are not allowed to use our phones during the lesson because it causes distraction.

The modal verb phrase 'are not allowed to' is correct, but 'my phone' should be 'our phones' to match the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'it will distraction and' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it causes distraction' to express the reason properly.

× Yes, and her name is she.

✓ Yes, and her name is she.

The sentence 'her name is she' is incorrect because 'she' is a subject pronoun, not used for naming. The correct form is 'her name is [name]' or 'she is [name]'. Since the name is missing, it should be corrected to 'Yes, and her name is [name].' However, without the actual name, the sentence is incomplete.

× She fostered a responsibility to her students and always saying language to them.

✓ She fosters a sense of responsibility in her students and always encourages them to use the language.

The verb tense should be present simple 'fosters' to match the context. 'Fostered a responsibility to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fosters a sense of responsibility in'. 'Always saying language to them' is ungrammatical; it should be 'always encourages them to use the language' or similar.

× Additionally, her lessons is really attractive to we saw we are really loving.

✓ Additionally, her lessons are really attractive to us, and we really love them.

The subject 'lessons' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Attractive to we saw we are really loving' is ungrammatical; it should be 'attractive to us, and we really love them' to express the idea clearly and correctly.