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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, but not much so. The atmosphere in my university is very relaxing, but in some areas we such as labs, we cannot bring food into the room because we need to keep the environment clean.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. Too much rules will make the environment too depressed and limit students development. So I think too much rule is unnecessary.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Yes, my tutor in university did a great job in her field of neuropsychology and neuro linguistics. She wrote a lot of articles about that field and did a great job.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然,且有语法错误(如“we such as labs”应为“in some areas such as labs”)。建议注意句子结构的完整性和准确性,同时避免冗余,保持表达简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are a few rules at my university. For example, in certain areas such as laboratories, students are not allowed to bring food to maintain cleanliness. Overall, the environment is quite relaxed.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“too much rules”应为“too many rules”,且表达略显重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复,同时可以适当扩展理由使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help. Too many rules can create a stressful atmosphere and restrict students' personal growth, which is not beneficial for learning.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达重复(“did a great job”出现两次),且词汇较为简单。建议丰富词汇,避免重复,并提供更多具体细节来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, my university tutor excels in neuropsychology and neurolinguistics. She has published numerous research articles and is highly respected for her expertise and dedication.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Too much rules will make the environment too depressed and limit students development.

Too many rules will make the environment too depressed and limit students' development.

“rules”是可数名词复数,应该用“many”而不是“much”;“students development”缺少所有格,应为“students' development”。

Singular and plural issue

× So I think too much rule is unnecessary.

So I think too many rules are unnecessary.

“rule”应为复数形式“rules”,且与复数主语搭配的谓语动词应为“are”;“too much”用于不可数名词,复数名词应使用“too many”。

Singular and plural issue

× The atmosphere in my university is very relaxing, but in some areas we such as labs, we cannot bring food into the room because we need to keep the environment clean.

The atmosphere in my university is very relaxing, but in some areas, such as labs, we cannot bring food into the room because we need to keep the environment clean.

“we such as labs”语序错误,应为“such as labs”;此处为插入语,需用逗号隔开。

Singular and plural issue

× Too much rules will make the environment too depressed and limit students development.

Too many rules will make the environment too depressing and limit students' development.

“depressed”是形容人的情绪,环境应使用“depressing”表示令人感到压抑的;“students development”缺少所有格,应为“students' development”。

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