Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Sure there are many rules for students to obey. Like first you cannot be late for schools and like your have to listen to your teachers to follow their teaching and that's the rules.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Sure, I think so, because students are too many. It's a very large population of students and there should be some rules for there to follow so that there cannot be a mess.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Sure. My high school English teacher called Miss Lee. She is a very respectful teacher to me because she can prepare so many different styles of her teaching skills to different.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“like your have to listen”应为“you have to listen”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复使用“like”,并且注意时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not be late and should always listen carefully to their teachers. These rules help maintain order and create a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,表达不够连贯,且存在语法错误,如“for there to follow”应为“for them to follow”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because with such a large number of students, clear guidelines help prevent chaos and ensure everyone behaves appropriately.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,如“she can prepare so many different styles of her teaching skills to different”不完整且不通顺。建议完整表达观点,使用正确的语法,并举例说明老师的优点。
Ví dụ: Yes, my high school English teacher, Miss Lee, is excellent. She adapts her teaching methods to suit different students, which makes learning more effective and enjoyable.
× Sure there are many rules for students to obey.
✓ Sure, there are many rules for students to obey.
句首缺少逗号,虽然不是语法错误,但加上逗号使句子更自然。此句无明显单复数错误。
× Like first you cannot be late for schools and like your have to listen to your teachers to follow their teaching and that's the rules.
✓ For example, first, you cannot be late for school, and you have to listen to your teachers to follow their teaching, and those are the rules.
“schools”应为不可数名词“school”;“your have”应为“you have”;“that's the rules”中“that's”是单数,后接复数“rules”,应改为“those are the rules”。
× Sure, I think so, because students are too many.
✓ Sure, I think so, because there are too many students.
“students are too many”语序错误,应为“there are too many students”。
× It's a very large population of students and there should be some rules for there to follow so that there cannot be a mess.
✓ It's a very large population of students, and there should be some rules for them to follow so that there won't be a mess.
“there to follow”中的“there”应为代词“them”;“there cannot be a mess”表达不自然,改为“there won't be a mess”更合适。
× Sure. My high school English teacher called Miss Lee.
✓ Sure. My high school English teacher is called Miss Lee.
缺少系动词“is”,使句子完整。
× She is a very respectful teacher to me because she can prepare so many different styles of her teaching skills to different.
✓ She is a very respectful teacher to me because she can prepare many different styles of teaching for different students.
“respectful”应为“respectable”或“respected”,但此处可用“respectful”表示“受尊敬的”;“so many different styles of her teaching skills”表达冗余,应简化为“many different styles of teaching”;“to different”不完整,应补充“students”。