Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
I would say there are a lot of rules to restrict students in school such as you need to respect your tutor, you need to respect your professor, and you need to study on study in the classroom on time.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I would say you need to depends on the situation. Sometimes it is, uh, it is good for students. Sometimes it's bad for students, yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I would say this is my tutor. He always George's students on time and give the feedback on time and he worked hard and he is the greatest teacher in my university.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如重复使用“you need to”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must respect their teachers and attend classes on time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法错误明显,如“you need to depends”应为“it depends”。建议使用更准确的表达,并且增加连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on the situation. Sometimes more rules can help students stay focused, but too many rules might make them feel restricted.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误(如“George's”应为“gives”)和时态混用,句子较长且缺少连接词。建议注意词汇准确性,统一时态,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a tutor who does his job very well. He always gives feedback on time and works hard. I think he is the best teacher at my university.
× I would say there are a lot of rules to restrict students in school such as you need to respect your tutor, you need to respect your professor, and you need to study on study in the classroom on time.
✓ I would say there are a lot of rules to restrict students in school such as you need to respect your tutor, you need to respect your professor, and you need to study in the classroom on time.
句子中“study on study”重复且多余,应删除其中一个“study”,使句子更通顺。这里涉及动词的正确使用,避免重复。
× I would say you need to depends on the situation.
✓ I would say you need to depend on the situation.
“need to”后应接动词原形,不能用第三人称单数形式“depends”,这是情态动词用法错误。
× He always George's students on time and give the feedback on time and he worked hard and he is the greatest teacher in my university.
✓ He always encourages students on time and gives feedback on time, he works hard and he is the greatest teacher in my university.
“George's”应为“encourages”,且动词“give”应加第三人称单数形式“gives”,动词时态应保持一致,使用一般现在时“works”而非过去时“worked”。这是第三人称单数和时态错误。