Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, we are inquired to wear an uniform every day and it can help us to maintain the improvement the environment for the fairness.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm in two minds about this. On the one hand, many students absolutely has more advantage from these roles. For example, it helps them stay disciplined. On the other hand, on the other hand, too many rules.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. The person I want to talk about is none other than my supervisor, Mr. Zhang. He is an excellent teacher because he explains difficult concepts very clearly. For example, he uses example. He uses thing example to.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“are inquired to wear an uniform”应为“are required to wear a uniform”。此外,句子结构不够清晰,表达的意思也不够明确。建议注意冠词的使用,避免重复和冗余,句子应简洁明了。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we are required to wear a uniform every day, which helps create a fair and disciplined environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“many students absolutely has”应为“many students absolutely have”。另外,表达不完整,最后一句话“On the other hand, on the other hand, too many rules.”没有完整表达观点。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复,完整表达对比观点。
Ví dụ: Well, I'm in two minds about this. On the one hand, more rules can help students stay disciplined and focused. On the other hand, too many rules might make students feel restricted and less motivated.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答后半部分表达不完整且重复,如“he uses example. He uses thing example to.”没有具体说明。建议在举例时提供具体细节,避免重复,确保句子完整且连贯。
Ví dụ: Absolutely. The person I want to talk about is my supervisor, Mr. Zhang. He is an excellent teacher because he explains difficult concepts very clearly. For example, he often uses real-life examples to help us understand complex ideas better.
× we are inquired to wear an uniform every day and it can help us to maintain the improvement the environment for the fairness.
✓ we are required to wear a uniform every day and it can help us to maintain and improve the environment for fairness.
这里“are inquired”用法错误,正确表达应该是“are required”,表示被要求做某事。另外,“an uniform”中的冠词错误,uniform以辅音音素开头,应使用“a”。句子中“maintain the improvement the environment”结构不正确,应改为“maintain and improve the environment”,使表达更清晰。
× many students absolutely has more advantage from these roles.
✓ many students absolutely have more advantages from these rules.
主语“many students”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“have”,而不是“has”。“advantage”应使用复数“advantages”,且“roles”应为“rules”,意思为规则。
× On the other hand, on the other hand, too many rules.
✓ On the other hand, there are too many rules.
句子结构不完整,缺少谓语动词。应补充“there are”使句子完整,表达“另一方面,有太多规则”。
× he uses example.
✓ he uses examples.
“example”应使用复数形式“examples”,表示他使用多个例子来解释。
× He uses thing example to.
✓ He uses things as examples too.
原句表达不清且语法错误,应改为“He uses things as examples too.”,表示他也使用事物作为例子。