Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive, and some words are unclear (e.g., 'rapper' instead of 'racket' or 'rapper'?). Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, check your vocabulary to ensure correct word usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules that students must follow. For example, we have to wear proper uniforms, and the use of mobile phones and electronic devices is strictly prohibited during class. These rules help maintain discipline and focus among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'doing more roles'). Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, avoid vague statements and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having more rules can benefit students because they teach discipline, which is important for their future. For instance, following rules at school prepares students to respect regulations in the workplace and society later on.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and informal expressions. Try to use more formal and precise language, and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'like' in formal speaking.

Ví dụ: Yes, my English teacher, Mr. Jeevan, does his job very well. He is my favourite teacher because his teaching style is engaging and effective. Moreover, he explains concepts clearly, which helps students understand the material easily.

× Yes, in my school there are various rules for students that are needed to be followed like the rules of uniform, students must be in proper uniforms and there was also a rule of avoiding rapper and the use of rapper was prohibited strictly in my school and also the usage of mobile phones and electronic devices.

✓ Yes, in my school there are various rules for students that need to be followed, like the rules of uniform. Students must wear proper uniforms, and there is also a rule against wearing a cap; the use of caps is strictly prohibited in my school, as well as the usage of mobile phones and electronic devices.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there was also a rule' when referring to a current rule, which should be 'there is also a rule' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'needed to be followed' is awkward; 'need to be followed' is correct. The sentence is long and run-on; breaking it into smaller sentences improves clarity. 'Rapper' seems to be a typo for 'cap' or 'rapper' is incorrect in this context; assuming 'cap' is intended. The verb 'must be in proper uniforms' is better expressed as 'must wear proper uniforms' for clarity.

× Yes, I think students would benefit more from doing more roles as the rules will teach them discipline in their life and it will help them in the future.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from having more rules as the rules will teach them discipline in their life and help them in the future.

The phrase 'doing more roles' is incorrect; it should be 'having more rules' to match the context. The modal verb 'would' is correctly used to express hypothetical benefit. The sentence is corrected to reflect the intended meaning clearly.

× It will make them ready for upcoming situations where they need that need to follow another rules.

✓ It will make them ready for upcoming situations where they need to follow other rules.

The phrase 'another rules' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; 'other' should be used with plural nouns like 'rules'. Also, 'need that need to follow' is redundant; it should be 'need to follow'.

× So this is a starting journey of the students I think it makes.

✓ So, this is the beginning of the students' journey, I think it is important.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Starting journey' is better expressed as 'beginning of the journey'. 'I think it makes' is incomplete and unclear; adding 'I think it is important' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I have a teacher who does his or her job really well. That was my English teacher and his name was Jeevan.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his job really well. He is my English teacher and his name is Jeevan.

The student is currently talking about a teacher they have, so present tense should be used. 'That was my English teacher' and 'his name was Jeevan' incorrectly use past tense; they should be 'He is my English teacher' and 'his name is Jeevan'.

× And actually he was my favorite teacher as the the way that how he teaches was really impressive.

✓ And actually, he is my favorite teacher because the way he teaches is really impressive.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tense; since the teacher is still favored, present tense 'is' and 'teaches' should be used. The phrase 'the the way that how he teaches' is redundant; 'the way he teaches' is correct.

× Like you can never get bored in his class and he will make you understand.

✓ You can never get bored in his class, and he makes you understand.

The phrase 'he will make you understand' is future tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'he makes you understand' is appropriate. Also, 'Like' at the beginning is informal and unnecessary.