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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Sure, in many schools there may be many rules different roles for students. In my school students should apply the role that they should come to their class on time and say she respects their teachers and do their school work very well. I think they are all the rules the students should be have.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Of course, I think some rules tailored for the students are good for their study and life. For example arrives at class on time and it can be sure there they have a good performance in their academic and also some respect to teachers can let them have a more close.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Of course in my university I have a teacher that really do her job very well. She's my math teacher and she focus on every student in her class. He does not give up every student even if it's they do not like study in some ways she will prepare for their classes.

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Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,导致意思难以理解。建议你简洁明了地回答问题,注意语法和句子结构,避免重复和冗长。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. Students must arrive on time, respect their teachers, and complete their assignments diligently. These rules help maintain discipline and create a positive learning environment.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够连贯,句子结构不完整,且缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并提供更具体的细节支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe that having more tailored rules can benefit students. For instance, arriving on time ensures they don't miss important lessons, which improves their academic performance. Additionally, respecting teachers fosters a closer and more positive relationship.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在性别代词混用和语法错误,影响表达清晰度。建议注意代词一致性,使用正确的时态和句子结构,并提供具体例子说明老师的优点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a math teacher at my university who does her job very well. She pays attention to every student and never gives up on anyone, even if they find the subject difficult. She always prepares extra materials to help us understand better.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Sure, in many schools there may be many rules different roles for students.

Sure, in many schools there may be many different rules for students.

这里的“rules different roles”结构不正确,应为“different rules”,表示“不同的规则”。这是单复数和词序问题。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I think they are all the rules the students should be have.

I think these are all the rules the students should have.

“should be have”是不正确的表达,应为“should have”,去掉多余的“be”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For example arrives at class on time and it can be sure there they have a good performance in their academic and also some respect to teachers can let them have a more close.

For example, arriving at class on time can ensure they have good academic performance, and also respecting teachers can help them become closer.

“arrives at class on time”应改为动名词短语“arriving at class on time”;“it can be sure there they have”结构不通顺,应改为“can ensure they have”;“some respect to teachers”应为“respecting teachers”;“have a more close”应为“become closer”。

Third person singular issue

× She's my math teacher and she focus on every student in her class.

She's my math teacher and she focuses on every student in her class.

主语是第三人称单数“she”,动词应加-s,改为“focuses”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× He does not give up every student even if it's they do not like study in some ways she will prepare for their classes.

She does not give up on any student even if they do not like studying; in some ways, she will prepare for their classes.

“He”应为“She”,与前文“She's my math teacher”保持一致;“give up every student”应为“give up on any student”;“it's they do not like study”结构错误,应为“they do not like studying”;句子应拆分为两部分,逻辑更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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