Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل وجعل الإجابة أكثر وضوحًا وترتيبًا. استخدم عبارات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار وتجنب التكرار، وركز على استخدام مفردات مناسبة وسليمة.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, and the principal has posted them on the walls so everyone can see them. These rules help create a peaceful and respectful environment, which encourages students to focus better on their studies.

Gợi ý: حاول تنظيم الإجابة بشكل أفضل واستخدام عبارات ربط لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة. تجنب التكرار وركز على التعبير عن الأفكار بشكل واضح وبمفردات مناسبة.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules would benefit students because following them creates a peaceful and respectful environment. Without rules, the school could become noisy, which would make studying difficult.

Gợi ý: ركز على الإجابة مباشرة على السؤال بذكر معلم معين وصف كيف يقوم بعمله بشكل جيد. استخدم جمل واضحة ومنظمة مع تفاصيل داعمة ومفردات مناسبة.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He explains lessons clearly and helps students when they have problems. Because of him, the class is peaceful and everyone respects each other.

× Yes, there are many rules in the school and the manager of the school put it in the wall of the building and everyone know it.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in the school, and the manager of the school puts them on the wall of the building, and everyone knows them.

The verb 'put' should be in the third person singular form 'puts' to agree with the singular subject 'manager'. Also, 'know' should be 'knows' for subject-verb agreement. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to 'rules' which is plural. 'In the wall' should be 'on the wall' as the correct preposition for placement.

× Yes, there are many rules in the school and the manager of the school put it in the wall of the building and everyone know it.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in the school, and the manager of the school puts them on the wall of the building, and everyone knows them.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to something displayed on a surface; the correct preposition is 'on'. Therefore, 'in the wall' should be 'on the wall'.

× This is benefit for student and bring the environment of the school peaceful and respectful and the student will will study more and more.

✓ This is beneficial for students and brings a peaceful and respectful environment to the school, and the students will study more and more.

'Benefit' should be 'beneficial' as an adjective. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement. 'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Will will' is a repetition error; only one 'will' is needed. 'The student' should be 'the students' for consistency.

× Yes, of course, of course it is benefit for a student because if the student follow it will bring peaceful and respectful environment and if don't they they don't follow the rule the the school will be noisy study.

✓ Yes, of course, it is beneficial for a student because if the student follows it, it will bring a peaceful and respectful environment, and if they don't follow the rules, the school will be noisy and difficult to study in.

'Benefit' should be 'beneficial' as an adjective. 'Follow' should be 'follows' to agree with singular subject 'student'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity. 'Noisy study' is incorrect; it should be 'noisy and difficult to study in' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes there are there are manager and give us the role in the school and principal.

✓ Yes, there is a manager and a principal who give us the rules in the school.

'There are there are manager' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a manager'. 'Give' should be 'gives' if singular, but since both manager and principal are plural, 'give' is correct. 'Role' should be 'rules' to fit context.

× We must follow it.

✓ We must follow them.

'It' is singular, but 'rules' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' to agree in number.

× If we don't follow it there will she or he will banish us and it is useful and benefit for us bring peaceful and respectful and not noisy environment.

✓ If we don't follow it, he or she will banish us, and it is useful and beneficial for us as it brings a peaceful, respectful, and quiet environment.

The phrase 'there will she or he will banish us' is incorrect; it should be 'he or she will banish us'. 'Benefit' should be 'beneficial'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct word order.