Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan tanpa pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, jelaskan aturan dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kosa kata yang tepat.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms to promote discipline and equality among everyone.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help because young students often get distracted and may behave disruptively. Therefore, having clear and strict rules is crucial to maintain order in school.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari pengulangan kata. Jelaskan dengan detail mengapa guru tersebut baik dalam pekerjaannya.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Mrs. Risma who does her job very well. She is kind and genuinely cares about her students' learning goals and progress.

× Yes, of course, there are some rules that implemented in many schools.

✓ Yes, of course, there are some rules that are implemented in many schools.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' before the past participle 'implemented' to form the passive voice correctly. The correct form is 'are implemented'. Dalam kalimat ini, kata kerja pasif harus menggunakan 'are' sebelum 'implemented' untuk membentuk kalimat pasif yang benar.

× For example, like a student should use what is that uniform to maintain a discipline and also equality, Yeah.

✓ For example, a student should wear the uniform to maintain discipline and equality.

The phrase 'use what is that uniform' is incorrect; 'wear the uniform' is the correct collocation. Also, 'a discipline' is incorrect; 'discipline' is uncountable here and does not need an article. Frasa 'use what is that uniform' salah; yang benar adalah 'wear the uniform'. Selain itu, 'a discipline' salah karena 'discipline' tidak dapat dihitung dan tidak perlu artikel.

× There's maintain a good rules and strict rules is very crucial in school.

✓ Maintaining good and strict rules is very crucial in school.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement issues and incorrect structure. 'There's maintain a good rules' is ungrammatical. The gerund 'Maintaining' correctly functions as the subject, and 'rules' is plural without 'a'. Kalimat asli memiliki masalah kesesuaian subjek-kata kerja dan struktur yang salah. 'There's maintain a good rules' tidak benar. 'Maintaining' sebagai gerund berfungsi sebagai subjek, dan 'rules' jamak tanpa 'a'.

× Yes, I have one of the teacher that do very well in her job.

✓ Yes, I have one of the teachers who does very well in her job.

'One of the teacher' should be 'one of the teachers' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'that do' should be 'who does' to agree with the singular subject 'one'. 'One of the teacher' harusnya 'one of the teachers' karena 'one of' diikuti oleh kata benda jamak. Selain itu, 'that do' harus 'who does' untuk sesuai dengan subjek tunggal 'one'.

× She's very kind and very care of what their child. What is the learning goals of of them?

✓ She's very kind and very caring about the children's learning goals.

'Very care of' is incorrect; the adjective form 'caring' is needed. 'Their child' is unclear and inconsistent; 'the children's learning goals' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'What is the learning goals' mixes singular and plural; it should be plural. 'Very care of' salah; harus menggunakan bentuk adjektif 'caring'. 'Their child' tidak jelas dan tidak konsisten; 'the children's learning goals' lebih jelas dan benar secara tata bahasa. Selain itu, 'What is the learning goals' mencampur tunggal dan jamak; harus jamak.