Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
There are many you in my school in China. First of all, students all wear uniform to keep a sense of equality and discipline. Students are a lot not allowed to use phone during class and there are some rules about respect teaching teachers.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, because they helped create a better learning environment. For example, rules like using not using phone during class prevent disruptions, especially during listening exercise. When students are not allowed to use their phones, they can focus better.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my high school math teacher is very dedicated to her teaching career. She's good at communicating with students and always inspires us to be curious and engage in class listening. She often uses real time problems to make maths more interesting.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方,比如“there are many you”应为“there are many rules”。建议你使用更准确的句子结构,避免语法错误,同时使表达更流畅自然。可以先直接回答问题,然后用具体细节支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school in China. For example, all students must wear uniforms to promote equality and discipline. Also, using phones during class is prohibited to avoid distractions. Additionally, students are expected to show respect to their teachers.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子,但有语法错误和重复,如“using not using phone”。建议你注意句子结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help create a better learning environment. For instance, prohibiting phone use during class prevents disruptions, especially during listening exercises. As a result, students can concentrate better on their studies.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 你的回答结构清晰,内容具体,但“class listening”表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达,如“participate actively in class”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, my high school math teacher is very dedicated to her career. She communicates well with students and always inspires us to be curious and actively participate in class. Moreover, she often uses real-life problems to make math more interesting.
× There are many you in my school in China.
✓ There are many rules in my school in China.
The word 'you' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'rules', which is plural. This is a singular and plural issue where the wrong noun form is used. Use 'rules' to correctly refer to multiple regulations.
× Students all wear uniform to keep a sense of equality and discipline.
✓ Students all wear uniforms to keep a sense of equality and discipline.
The noun 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to what all students wear individually. Also, 'all' is better placed after 'students' for natural English order: 'All students wear uniforms.' This is a singular and plural issue combined with word order.
× Students are a lot not allowed to use phone during class and there are some rules about respect teaching teachers.
✓ Students are mostly not allowed to use phones during class, and there are some rules about respecting teachers.
The phrase 'are a lot not allowed' is incorrect; 'mostly not allowed' or 'generally not allowed' is correct. 'Use phone' should be 'use phones' (plural). 'Respect teaching teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'respecting teachers'. This involves sentence structure errors and singular/plural issues.
× Yes, because they helped create a better learning environment.
✓ Yes, because they help create a better learning environment.
The sentence refers to a general truth or ongoing situation, so present tense with modal verb implication is appropriate. 'Helped' is past tense, which is incorrect here. Use 'help' to indicate habitual action.
× For example, rules like using not using phone during class prevent disruptions, especially during listening exercise.
✓ For example, rules like not using phones during class prevent disruptions, especially during listening exercises.
The phrase 'using not using phone' is incorrect; it should be 'not using phones'. 'Phone' should be plural 'phones' because it refers to multiple students' phones. 'Listening exercise' should be plural 'listening exercises' to indicate multiple instances. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue.
× When students are not allowed to use their phones, they can focus better.
✓ When students are not allowed to use their phones, they can focus better.
This sentence is correct. No correction needed.
× Yes, my high school math teacher is very dedicated to her teaching career.
✓ Yes, my high school math teacher is very dedicated to her teaching career.
This sentence is correct. No correction needed.
× She's good at communicating with students and always inspires us to be curious and engage in class listening.
✓ She's good at communicating with students and always inspires us to be curious and engage in class discussions.
The phrase 'engage in class listening' is awkward and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'engage in class discussions' or 'engage in class activities'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and collocations.
× She often uses real time problems to make maths more interesting.
✓ She often uses real-time problems to make math more interesting.
'Real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as an adjective. 'Maths' is British English; 'math' is American English, but both are acceptable depending on context. Also, 'problems' is correct plural. This is a minor issue with quantifiers and adjective form.