Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本切题，但“a declaration of my suit”用词不自然，可能想表达“展示个人风格”或“体现个性”。可以直接说明喜欢买鞋的原因，并用“because”连接具体细节；“on websites”应改为“online”，“about several times a year”应改为“several times a year”。建议减少“Umm”等填充词，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, because I think shoes are a great way to express my personal style. I usually buy shoes online several times a year, especially when I find a good discount.

Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点、原因和例子，但存在时态、主谓一致和句子连接问题。“Yes, I have”后应使用现在完成时或另起句；“the shop offer”应为“the shop offered”，“I order”应为“I ordered”。“last year”表示过去时间，所以应统一使用一般过去时；最后的“1st”意思不清楚，建议改为“the quality”或删除。可使用“also”和“as a result”等连接词让逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I bought a pair of sneakers online because they were cheaper and the store offered free delivery. For example, I ordered them from Taobao last year, and I was happy with both the price and the quality.

Gợi ý: 回答太简短，而且“one or two hundreds”表达错误。金额应说“one or two hundred yuan/dollars”或“between 100 and 200 yuan”。建议补充购买频率、预算原因或鞋子的类型，使答案更完整；“Overall”在这里不是必需，可以直接回答金额。

Ví dụ: I usually spend between 100 and 200 yuan on a pair of shoes. I think that is a reasonable amount because I mainly buy casual sneakers for everyday use. If I find a durable pair, I might spend a little more.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“prefer...more than”应改为“prefer...to”，“make me stand a long time”表达不自然，应改为“allow me to stand for a long time”。“and and”是重复错误。可以增加一个具体场景，例如上学、工作或长途旅行，并使用“although”进行简单对比。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I often have to walk or stand for a long time. For example, I wear comfortable sneakers when I go shopping or travel. Although fashionable shoes look attractive, they can be painful if I wear them all day.

× Umm yes, because I think it is a declaration of my suit. Umm, I buy it on websites about several times a year.

✓ Umm, yes, because I think they are a way to express my style. Umm, I buy them online several times a year.

“Shoes”是复数名词，所以不能用单数代词“it”指代，应使用复数代词“them”。另外，“about several times”搭配不自然；“several times a year”本身已经表示“大约几次”。

× Yes I have, I bought Caro sneakers online because they are cheaper and the shop offer free delivery.

✓ Yes, I have. I bought Caro sneakers online because they are cheaper and the shop offers free delivery.

主语“the shop”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时动词“offer”要加“-s”，变成“offers”。同时，这里有两个完整句子，使用句号分开更清楚。

× For example I order them from Taobao last year I was happy with the price and 1st.

✓ For example, I ordered them from Taobao last year. I was happy with the price and 1st.

“last year”表示过去时间，所以动词“order”应使用一般过去式“ordered”。此外，原句把多个完整句子直接连接在一起，应使用句号分开。

× Overall, I usually spend one or two hundreds on shoes.

✓ Overall, I usually spend one or two hundred dollars on shoes.

表示具体金额时，“hundred”前面有“one”或“two”等数字，通常使用单数形式“hundred”，不能说“two hundreds”。同时，加上“dollars”可以明确说明金额单位。

× Well, I prefer comfortable shoes more than fashionable shoes because I think comfortable shoes can make me stand a long time and and walk every day.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes because I think comfortable shoes can make me stand for a long time and walk every day.

固定搭配是“prefer A to B”，所以应使用介词“to”，而不是“more than”。表示持续一段时间时，应说“stand for a long time”。

× Well, I prefer comfortable shoes more than fashionable shoes because I think comfortable shoes can make me stand a long time and and walk every day.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes because I think comfortable shoes can make me stand for a long time and walk every day.

原句中“and”重复出现了一次。并列两个动作“stand”和“walk”时，只需要使用一个“and”。