Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise: open with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., verb forms and collocations), avoid repetition, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words to clarify reasons.

Ví dụ: Not really. I only buy new shoes when my old ones wear out, which is about every six months. I try to pick durable, comfortable pairs so I don’t have to shop frequently.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and plural forms, reduce redundancy, and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., 'and', 'so', 'for example'). Mention one specific example to make the answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. It’s very convenient because I can compare styles and prices across several stores, and I often find good discounts during sales. Also, delivery saves time—for example, I recently bought trainers online and they arrived the next day.

Gợi ý: Clarify currency and correct vocabulary/grammar mistakes. Be specific and concise: give a clear amount, explain the reason with correct word choice (e.g., 'good quality footwear'), and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about $200 on a new pair of shoes because I think good-quality footwear is necessary. I prefer comfortable, durable shoes even if they cost more, since they last longer and protect my feet.

Gợi ý: Fix vocabulary and grammar: use correct words (e.g., 'fashionable' vs 'comfortable', 'support my feet', 'sneakers', 'cushioning'). Start with a clear preference sentence, then give a specific example with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable, durable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend long hours working and need good support. For example, I wear sneakers with good cushioning when I commute, even if they aren’t trendy.

× Not really, I only buy new shoes where I need to replace an older pair usually about every six months.

✓ Not really, I only buy new shoes when I need to replace an older pair, usually about every six months.

The issue is not strictly plural but a sentence structure error (use 'when' instead of 'where') and punctuation; however 'shoes' and 'pair' are correct. Replace 'where' with 'when' for time reference and add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'when' to indicate time and separate clauses with a comma.

× I try to choose durable comfortable shoes so I don't have to often or I don't have to shop often.

✓ I try to choose durable, comfortable shoes so I don't have to shop often.

Redundant phrasing and adverb placement error: 'have to often' is awkward. Place 'often' after the verb phrase 'shop' and remove duplicate clause. Add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'durable' and 'comfortable'.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online. It's very convenient because I could compare different style and price across several stores and I found a good discount during a sale.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online. It's very convenient because I can compare different styles and prices across several stores, and I often find good discounts during sales.

Mixed tense and incorrect modal: 'could' suggests past ability; use 'can' for general capability. 'Style' and 'price' need plural forms 'styles' and 'prices' to match 'different'. 'I found a good discount during a sale' uses past tense; for general experience use present simple 'I often find good discounts during sales.' Suggestion: Keep present tense for general statements, pluralize countable nouns, and use 'can' for general ability.

× Also, I don't need to pick up them because we have the convenient delivery service.

✓ Also, I don't need to pick them up because we have a convenient delivery service.

Pronoun and word order: 'pick up them' is incorrect; place object pronoun after verb particle: 'pick them up.' Remove unneeded article 'the' before 'convenient' and use 'a convenient delivery service.' Suggestion: Position object pronouns after phrasal verb particles and use correct articles.

× I usually spend about two hundred on a new pairing of shoes because I consider good old food wear necessary.

✓ I usually spend about two hundred on a new pair of shoes because I consider good footwear necessary.

Multiple errors: 'pairing of shoes' should be 'pair of shoes.' 'Good old food wear' is nonsensical; likely meant 'good footwear.' Replace phrase accordingly. Use 'pair' singular with 'a new' and 'footwear' as uncountable noun. Suggestion: Use correct collocations: 'a new pair of shoes' and 'good footwear.'

× I prefer to buy comfortable and durable shoes even if they cost a bit more because they last longer and it's supposed to my feet.

✓ I prefer to buy comfortable, durable shoes even if they cost a bit more because they last longer and they're better for my feet.

Pronoun and phrase errors: 'it's supposed to my feet' is ungrammatical. Use 'they're better for my feet' to refer to shoes. Add comma between adjectives. Suggestion: Use clear pronoun reference and common expressions like 'better for my feet.'

× I prefer comfortable durable shoes rather than fashionable vents because I spend a lot of time working and need a footwear support my feet.

✓ I prefer comfortable, durable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time working and need footwear that supports my feet.

'Vents' is wrong word; use 'ones' to mean 'fashionable shoes.' 'A footwear support my feet' is ungrammatical: use 'footwear that supports my feet' or 'a supportive shoe.' Add comma between adjectives. Suggestion: Use correct pronouns and relative clauses for purpose ('that supports').

× For instance, I choose a snakers with good cuisine on commuting and we can work even they are not the trendiness.

✓ For instance, I choose sneakers with good cushioning for commuting, and I can work even if they are not trendy.

Multiple errors: 'snakers' -> 'sneakers'; 'cuisine' -> 'cushioning'; 'on commuting' -> 'for commuting'; 'we can work even they are not the trendiness' should be 'I can work even if they are not trendy.' Fix subject consistency ('I' not 'we') and adjective 'trendy.' Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and subordinating conjunctions ('even if') and maintain consistent subject pronouns.