Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct grammar and pronunciation errors, keep answers concise (max 3–4 sentences), and use linking words to connect ideas. State a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid unclear phrases (‘live my landing shoes’, ‘too dumb to use’).

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often; I usually buy them only when I need a specific pair. For instance, I replace my walking shoes only when they are completely worn out, so I might buy a new pair once every two years.

Gợi ý: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details using linking words (e.g., so, therefore, because). Correct vocabulary and collocations (‘try the same model’, ‘return policy’). Keep sentences short and accurate.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I usually try the same model in a shop first to check the fit, and then I order it online because prices are lower and the selection is wider. I also check the return policy in case the shoes don't fit.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, then give a specific amount and a reason. Fix grammar and word choice errors (‘five thousand Thai’ → ‘5,000 baht’, ‘leave pace them’ unclear). Use linking words like ‘but’ or ‘because’ to explain preferences.

Ví dụ: I usually set a budget; the maximum I spend is about 5,000 baht. However, I prefer to invest in a high-quality pair because it lasts longer and I won't need to replace shoes often.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Correct collocations (‘styles and colors that suit most outfits’, not ‘tight’ or ‘every most outfit’). Be specific about why comfort matters (e.g., support, cushioning).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot and need good support and cushioning. I also choose neutral styles and colors that suit most outfits so I can wear them every day.

× For example, I only live my landing shoes when they are too dumb to use, so I might buy a new pair only once every couple a year.

✓ For example, I only replace my running shoes when they are too worn to use, so I might buy a new pair only once every couple of years.

Errors: 'live' should be 'replace' (word choice, but treated as sentence structure error); 'landing shoes' likely intended 'running shoes'; 'dumb' incorrect adjective — 'too worn to use' conveys meaning; 'every couple a year' is incorrect pluralization and preposition; should be 'every couple of years'. Suggestion: use correct verb for replacing items, use correct adjective 'worn', and use plural 'years' with 'every couple of'. Ensure nouns match pluralization rules.

× Yes I have first I usually tie the same model in a shop to make sure the size and fit are right and if they feel comfortable I will order the shoe or lies because the prices are often lower and the selection is better.

✓ Yes I have. First, I usually try the same model in a shop to make sure the size and fit are right, and if they feel comfortable I will order the shoes online because the prices are often lower and the selection is better.

Errors: 'have first' missing punctuation and auxiliary use; 'tie' should be 'try' (incorrect verb); 'order the shoe or lies' unclear — intended 'order the shoes online'. Also plural agreement: 'shoes' and adverb 'online'. Suggestion: use correct verbs, add punctuation to separate sentences, and use 'online' for ordering. Ensure present participle not required here; primary fixes are verb choice and sentence separation.

× I also check the later's policy in case the pair doesn't fit.

✓ I also check the retailer's return policy in case the pair doesn't fit.

Error: 'later's' is incorrect pronoun/word choice; intended 'retailer' (a noun). Also 'return policy' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use correct noun 'retailer' and include 'return' to specify the policy.

× I usually set a budget for sure the maximum I will spend is about five thousand Thai but I prefer to invest in a good quality pair so I don't have to leave pace them often

✓ I usually set a budget; for sure the maximum I will spend is about five thousand baht, but I prefer to invest in a good-quality pair so I don't have to replace them often.

Errors: sentence run-on and several word-choice mistakes: 'Thai' should be 'baht' (currency), 'good quality' should be hyphenated 'good-quality' as adjective before noun, 'leave pace them' is incorrect — intended 'replace them'. Suggestion: separate clauses with punctuation, use correct currency word, hyphenate compound adjective, and use correct verb 'replace'.

× I also choose style and color that are tight so I can wear them every most outfit every day.

✓ I also choose styles and colors that are versatile so I can wear them with most outfits every day.

Errors: 'style and color' should be plural 'styles and colors' to match 'most outfits'; 'tight' is wrong adjective — 'versatile' fits meaning; 'every most outfit' is wrong order and extra word. Suggestion: make nouns plural for general statements, choose adjective matching intended meaning, and use correct preposition 'with' when talking about outfits.