Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and correct verb forms (e.g., ‘I buy them’).

Ví dụ: Not really. I only buy shoes about once a year because I tend to wear the same pair every day for work and walking, so they wear out quickly.

Gợi ý: Make the answer fully grammatical and slightly more specific. Begin with a direct yes/no, then explain briefly with linking words (for example, ‘because’ or ‘so’). Fix incomplete sentence at the end and mention how you ensure fit when buying online.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always buy shoes online because I consider them a necessity rather than a fashion item. I usually order the same model and size each time, and I read reviews to make sure the fit is reliable.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant but can be tightened and made more natural. Start with a direct amount, then give a brief reason and one specific detail (for example, what that budget gets you). Avoid repeating phrases.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about 10,000 Japanese yen per pair because I buy practical, durable shoes rather than fashionable ones. That budget generally gets me a comfortable, everyday pair that lasts about a year.

Gợi ý: Be concise and eliminate hesitations. Give one clear preference sentence, then add a specific reason using linking words. Fix awkward phrases like ‘comfortable comfortability’ and use natural vocabulary (e.g., ‘comfort and durability’).

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day; therefore I prioritize comfort and durability over fashion.

× I'm not particularly a fan of buying shoes like.

✓ I'm not particularly a fan of buying shoes.

The filler 'like' is unnecessary and makes the sentence ungrammatical. Remove 'like' to form a complete, clear sentence. Ensure statements avoid colloquial filler words that break sentence structure.

× Buy it on annual cycle because I mostly wear the same pair every day to work and to go for a walk so it wears down really soon.

✓ I buy them on an annual cycle because I mostly wear the same pair every day for work and walking, so they wear out really quickly.

Sentence started with a bare infinitive 'Buy' instead of a subject and finite verb. Use subject 'I' and correct verb forms. Use plural pronoun 'them' for shoes and 'wear out' rather than 'wear down'. 'Annual cycle' is better phrased as 'on an annual cycle' and 'really soon' -> 'really quickly.'

× Yes, as a matter of fact I only buy shoes online.

✓ Yes, as a matter of fact, I only buy shoes online.

Grammar is correct but needs a comma after introductory phrase for clarity. This is a punctuation/flow issue rather than tense, but keeping present simple is appropriate for habitual action.

× This is because I see shoes as a necessity, not a fashion item, so I only need them when I need to replace them.

✓ This is because I see shoes as a necessity rather than a fashion item, so I only buy them when I need to replace a pair.

Original uses repetitive 'need' and awkward structure. Replace second clause with 'I only buy them when I need to replace a pair' to clarify meaning and avoid repetition.

× And I always buy the same shoes, so size and fitting doesn't.

✓ And I always buy the same shoes, so size and fit don't change.

'Size and fitting' is awkward; use 'size and fit.' The compound subject 'size and fit' is plural, so use 'don't' not 'doesn't.' Also 'change' completes the idea.

× As I mentioned previously, I see shoes as a necessity, not a fashion item, so I only have a limited budget, around 10,000 Japanese yen per pair.

✓ As I mentioned previously, I see shoes as a necessity rather than a fashion item, so I have a limited budget of around 10,000 Japanese yen per pair.

Minor wording and preposition adjustments: 'rather than' is clearer, and 'a limited budget of around' is more natural. Present simple tense correctly expresses habitual situation.

× The price doesn't change much.

✓ The prices don't change much.

If referring to shoes in general, use plural 'prices' and plural verb 'don't.' If referring to 'the price' as singular across time, original could be acceptable, but plural better matches context of different models.

× I prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Included for completeness.

× It's a good thing to buy a fashion shoes, but uh, I see shoes as a necessity, not a fashion item, so I usually buy comfortable shoes.

✓ It's fine to buy fashionable shoes, but I see shoes as a necessity rather than a fashion item, so I usually buy comfortable shoes.

Use adjective 'fashionable' instead of noun phrase 'a fashion shoes' and remove article mismatch. Replace 'a good thing to buy' with 'It's fine to buy' for natural phrasing. Remove filler 'uh.'

× Durability and comfortable comfortability is.

✓ Durability and comfort are most important to me.

Original is ungrammatical and redundant ('comfortable comfortability'). Use noun pair 'durability and comfort' as plural subject with plural verb implicitly or rephrase as 'are most important to me' to complete the sentence and convey intended meaning.