Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetition (e.g., avoid "I I" and filler sounds). Use correct verb forms and collocations (e.g., "wear out", "when they are worn out").

Ví dụ: I don't like buying shoes much. I usually keep a pair until they wear out, because I prefer to save money. However, if a pair becomes uncomfortable or clearly worn, I will replace it immediately.

Gợi ý: Give a direct brief answer, then explain with one clear reason and an example. Correct grammar (e.g., "not sure about my size", "I buy shoes in physical stores"). Avoid vague phrases like "not normal in women's size"—be specific about sizing issues. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I'm not confident about sizing. For example, sizes can vary between brands here in the Philippines, so I prefer trying shoes on in physical stores before buying.

Gợi ý: Answer with clear present-tense habits, then give a specific range and an exception. Fix pronoun and tense errors (e.g., "I buy shoes from [shop] and they usually cost less than 1,000 pesos; the most I've paid was 5,000 pesos"). Use linking words like "usually" and "however" to contrast typical spending and the maximum amount.

Ví dụ: I usually spend less than 1,000 pesos on shoes from ChipSource. However, the most I've ever paid was about 5,000 pesos for a special pair.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with two concise, specific reasons connected by linking words. Improve word choice (e.g., "comfort over fashion", "not very interested in shoes"). Avoid sentence fragments; combine related ideas into full sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I wear them all day at work and need good support. Also, I value versatility, so shoes that are comfortable and suitable for both work and going out are ideal.

× No I don't like buying shoes because as long as I have shoes that I can wear I would wear it until it will wear out.

✓ No, I don't like buying shoes because as long as I have shoes I can wear, I wear them until they wear out.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'shoes' is plural so use plural pronouns and verbs ('them', 'they wear out'). Remove unnecessary conditional 'would' and future 'will' to match habitual action in present simple. Also add commas for clarity.

× And how often I I buy shoes it's uh it depends if I can see that my shoes that are using are burnout already.

✓ How often I buy shoes depends on whether I can see that the shoes I am using are worn out already.

Tense and sentence structure: Use present simple 'depends' for habitual condition. Correct relative clause and present continuous 'I am using' or simply 'I am wearing' and use adjective 'worn out' instead of 'burnout'. Remove extraneous words and duplicate 'I'.

× No, I haven't bought shoes online because I'm not entirely sure what is the size of my feet because it's not normal in women's size especially here in the Philippines.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online because I'm not entirely sure of my shoe size; women's sizes are not standardized here in the Philippines.

Preposition and noun phrase use: Use 'sure of my shoe size' rather than 'what is the size of my feet'. Use present perfect correctly remains. Clarify 'not normal in women's size' to 'women's sizes are not standardized'. Also split into clearer clauses.

× So I bought you as in a physical stores.

✓ So I buy them in physical stores.

Pronoun and tense: Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to shoes. Use present simple 'buy' for general habit. Use correct noun phrase 'physical stores' (no article needed) and remove 'you as in' which is incorrect.

× I bought shoes in Chipsource and usually that costs less than 1000 pesos, but the highest amount that I paid for your shoes was 5000 pesos.

✓ I buy shoes at Chipsource and they usually cost less than 1000 pesos, but the most I have paid for a pair of shoes was 5000 pesos.

Tense and agreement: Use present simple 'buy' and 'cost' for habits. Match plural subject 'shoes' with 'they cost'. Replace 'that' with 'they'. Use 'the most I have paid' or 'the highest amount I paid' and 'a pair of shoes' instead of 'your shoes' (wrong pronoun).

× Uh, I'm not really that into shoes. I'm not a conservative shoes.

✓ I'm not really that into shoes. I'm not conservative about shoes.

Incorrect use of articles and nouns: 'conservative' is an adjective; you cannot say 'a conservative shoes'. Use 'conservative about shoes' or 'conservative when it comes to shoes'. Also punctuation: split into two clear sentences.

× As long as I can wear it comfortably. As long as I can use it for work, I can use it when I go outside.

✓ As long as I can wear them comfortably and use them for work or when I go out, that's enough.

Pronoun and sentence structure: Use plural pronoun 'them' for 'shoes'. Combine fragments into one sentence for clarity. Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' for typical phrasing.

× So I would prefer comfortability than fashion.

✓ So I would prefer comfort to fashion.

Incorrect use of nouns and prepositions: 'comfortability' is awkward; use 'comfort'. Use 'prefer A to B' structure, not 'prefer A than B'.