Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammar errors (e.g., "I'm a big fan", "different brands") and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, and I often buy them a few times a year. For example, I collected several pairs of Nike trainers because I prefer matching shoes to outfits, and last year I bought about seven pairs to complement new clothes.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer first, then give a brief, specific reason with clear linking words. Correct common mistakes (e.g., "far easier", "I prefer online shopping"). Finish sentences fully.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I have limited free time as a dietitian. Furthermore, online shopping is more convenient and saves me from crowded markets and long traffic, so I can order items quickly and have them delivered.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with an approximate amount or range, then explain with one clear example. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetition. Use linking words like "for example" or "however" to structure the reply.

Ví dụ: It depends, but I usually spend between $50 and $150 on a pair of shoes. For example, I’ll pay more—around $100–$150—for branded, formal shoes when I need to attend events because I want to look presentable and feel comfortable; however, I buy cheaper pairs for everyday use.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then support it with a concise reason and one specific example. Simplify language and correct grammar (e.g., "support your foot structure"). Avoid vague references like "lots of studies" without brief clarification.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I’m active and need proper support for my feet. For instance, I choose well-cushioned sports shoes that protect my foot structure when I run or exercise.

× Definitely I'm whose fan of many different brand and I have great collection of Nike brand.

✓ Definitely I'm a big fan of many different brands and I have a great collection of Nike shoes.

The sentence misuses 'whose' instead of 'a' and has incorrect noun forms. Use 'a big fan' and plural 'brands' for generality; 'Nike shoes' is clearer than 'Nike brand'. Also add 'a' before 'great collection'.

× Whenever I get time I love to buy shoes because often I keep getting new dresses and habitual to match the shoe with the particular color.

✓ Whenever I get time, I love to buy shoes because I often get new dresses and am in the habit of matching the shoes to a particular color.

Word order and verb forms were incorrect. Place adverbs like 'often' before main verbs; use 'am in the habit of' for habitual actions and 'matching the shoes to' for correct preposition and agreement. Add commas for clarity.

× In the last year I have bought almost 7.

✓ In the last year I have bought almost seven pairs.

Number should be written consistently and 'pairs' clarifies the count for shoes; include 'pairs' because shoes come in pairs. Using words instead of digits improves formality in speech transcripts.

× Being a dietitian I have very limited time so I really don't want to waste in shopping and going to the market and almost using my time for the traffic jams.

✓ Being a dietitian, I have very limited time, so I really don't want to waste time shopping or going to the market and dealing with traffic jams.

The phrase 'waste in shopping' is incorrect; use 'waste time shopping'. 'Almost using my time for the traffic jams' is ungrammatical; replace with 'dealing with traffic jams'. Add commas to separate clauses.

× So that's why I avoid going to the market for shopping and I always prefer online and moreover it is far more easier and convenient and I'm also.

✓ So that's why I avoid going to the market and always prefer shopping online; moreover, it is much easier and more convenient.

Remove redundant words ('for shopping'), use 'shopping online' or 'prefer online' consistently. 'Far more easier' is incorrect comparative; use 'much easier' and 'more convenient'. The sentence ended with 'and I'm also' incomplete—remove it.

× It depends upon the purpose I'm buying the shoes.

✓ It depends on the purpose for which I'm buying the shoes.

Use 'depends on' rather than 'depends upon' (both possible but 'depends on' is more natural here) and include 'for which' to connect purpose to the verb; this improves clarity and grammatical flow.

× For example, if I'm going for an organization or to present myself in the event in front of people, then I like to buy go for branded and quality one because I really want to be presentable and comfortable.

✓ For example, if I'm attending an event or presenting myself in front of people, then I prefer to buy branded, high-quality shoes because I want to look presentable and be comfortable.

'Going for an organization' is unclear; use 'attending an event'. Replace 'buy go for' with 'prefer to buy' and 'branded and quality one' with 'branded, high-quality shoes' to match plural 'shoes'. Use 'look presentable' and 'be comfortable' for parallel structure.

× But if I'm buying for.

✓ But if I'm buying shoes for everyday use, I choose cheaper or less formal options.

Original sentence is incomplete. Provide a complete alternative that fits context: specify purpose like 'everyday use' and contrast with previous clause. This restores sentence structure.

× I'm very much into sports so I always opt comfortable shoes over stylish one because there are lots of compelling studies regarding the shoe that should be comfortable which also support your bone as well as structure of your foot which don't this.

✓ I'm very much into sports, so I always choose comfortable shoes over stylish ones because many studies show that shoes should be comfortable and support the bones and structure of your feet.

Use 'choose' or 'opt for' plus plural 'ones' for shoes. 'There are lots of compelling studies regarding the shoe that should be comfortable' is awkward; rephrase to 'many studies show'. 'Support your bone as well as structure of your foot' needs plural and proper nouns: 'support the bones and structure of your feet'. Remove 'which don't this' as it's meaningless.