Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Fix verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking phrase for frequency (e.g., "usually" or "whenever").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I have more than ten pairs, and I usually buy new ones whenever I have some extra money, roughly two or three times a year.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct grammar: give a clear statement about experience, then explain advantages and one specific disadvantage using linking words (e.g., "however" or "but"). Avoid unclear phrases and filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient and offers more choices. However, the main downside is uncertainty about the size, so I sometimes have to return items.

Gợi ý: Be specific and grammatical: state a clear price range, then explain factors that affect cost using linking words. Use correct nouns and avoid unclear words (e.g., "stallion"). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about 3,000 to 5,000 pesos per pair, depending on the brand and quality. For everyday shoes I choose affordable but durable options, while for formal occasions I spend more for polished leather shoes.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a concrete example. Use correct phrasing and avoid irrelevant or confusing comments. Limit to one topic sentence and one supporting sentence with a specific example.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them all day and they prevent foot pain. For example, I usually choose cushioned sneakers for commuting and walking long distances.

× Actually I have more than 10 pair of shoes.

✓ Actually I have more than 10 pairs of shoes.

'Pair' is a countable noun and when referring to more than one you must use the plural form 'pairs'. Use 'more than 10 pairs of shoes' to match number and noun form.

× I I frequently buying shoes when they when whenever I have some extra money umm.

✓ I frequently buy shoes whenever I have some extra money.

After an adverb like 'frequently' the base verb 'buy' is required, not the -ing form. Remove duplicated 'I' and redundant words; 'whenever' alone expresses the idea.

× Yes, I've tried to put the shoes online because she buying shoes online is more convenient.

✓ Yes, I've tried buying shoes online because buying shoes online is more convenient.

'Tried' plus gerund (buying) is correct to express attempting an activity. 'Tried to put the shoes online' is incorrect here, and 'she' is a mistake; use consistent gerund structure 'tried buying shoes online'.

× But what of the downside of buying shoes online is you're not about S you are not sure about the size umm and it.

✓ But the downside of buying shoes online is that you are not sure about the size.

Sentence had extra words and misplaced pronouns ('you're not about S'). Use 'that' to introduce the clause and remove irrelevant fragments to make the pronoun 'you' correctly refer to the buyer.

× I usually spend around 3000 to 5000 pesos on a pair of shoes depending on the stallion brand.

✓ I usually spend around 3000 to 5000 pesos on a pair of shoes depending on the brand.

'Stallion brand' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'certain brand' or just 'the brand'. Remove 'stallion' which is irrelevant; keep quantifier range 'around 3000 to 5000 pesos' which is acceptable.

× For everyday shoes it feels affordable but durable options.

✓ Everyday shoes are affordable but less durable options.

Original mixed subject and predicate incorrectly. Use plural subject 'Everyday shoes' and compare attributes: 'affordable but less durable' clarifies intended contrast between affordability and durability.

× Uh, passports or formal occasions and we need to pay more insurance.

✓ For special or formal occasions we need to pay more for quality or insurance.

Original sentence fragments ('passports or formal occasions') are unclear. Likely meant 'for special or formal occasions' and to 'pay more for quality' or 'for insurance'. Reconstruct sentence to add preposition and object for clarity.

× Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because using a comfortable shoes you can use it in the laundry, you can also. Music to your.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because with comfortable shoes you can wear them all day, and they are better for walking.

Original has article and noun agreement errors ('a comfortable shoes') and incomplete fragments ('you can also. Music to your'). Replace with clear reasons: use plural 'shoes' with plural pronoun 'them', and provide complete verbs and objects.