Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 불필요한 망설임과 중복 표현을 줄이세요. 또한, 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 사용하고, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 더 명확히 제시하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because they can complete an outfit and enhance my fashion sense. I usually buy new shoes once a month, such as comfortable and stylish sneakers or flats.

Gợi ý: 답변에서 중복된 단어와 어색한 표현을 줄이고, 문장 구조를 명확히 하세요. 또한, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고 접속사를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought shoes online in February because it is very convenient. I don't need to visit physical stores, and it's easier to compare different brands and prices, which saves me time and effort.

Gợi ý: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문장 연결을 위해 접속사를 더 활용하고, 예시를 구체적으로 설명하면 더 좋습니다. 또한, 문장 길이를 적절히 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about $200 on shoes because I want to buy good quality ones that last a long time. For example, I always compare prices online before making a purchase to stay within my budget.

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 혼란스럽고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 제시하고, 문장 연결을 위해 적절한 접속사를 사용하세요. 또한, 불필요한 단어를 제거하고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer comfortable shoes. When I was in my 20s, I used to wear fashionable shoes to look stylish, but now I choose comfort because it helps me stay on my feet without pain.

× wearing red shoes can complete fashion and enhance one's fashion sense.

✓ wearing red shoes can complete a fashion look and enhance one's fashion sense.

The verb 'complete' is used incorrectly here; it should be followed by a noun phrase. Adding 'a fashion look' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'complete fashion' is not a correct collocation.

× I bought shoes online February time because of because it's quite convenient.

✓ I bought shoes online in February because it's quite convenient.

The phrase 'February time' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is needed before months. Also, 'because of because' is redundant; only 'because' is needed.

× I don't need to go go to physical stores and it's easier to compare the other brands and prices.

✓ I don't need to go to physical stores and it's easier to compare other brands and prices.

The repeated word 'go' is a typo and should be removed. Also, 'the other brands' is incorrect here; 'other brands' without 'the' is appropriate.

× So it it saves my time and effort so I enjoy.

✓ So it saves me time and effort, so I enjoy it.

The pronoun 'my' should be 'me' as the object of 'saves'. Also, 'it it' is a repetition error. Adding 'it' at the end clarifies what is enjoyed.

× I usually spend about $200 on shoes because I want to buy good quality ones that last a long time and I always try to stay in my budget.

✓ I usually spend about $200 on shoes because I want to buy good-quality ones that last a long time, and I always try to stay within my budget.

The phrase 'good quality' should be hyphenated as 'good-quality' when used as an adjective. Also, 'stay in my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' for correct prepositional usage.

× For example, compare prices online before making a purchase.

✓ For example, I compare prices online before making a purchase.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' makes it a complete sentence. 'Compare prices online' alone is a fragment.

× Actually I prefer to comfortable shoes but when I was in my 20s I used to wear a fashion shoes to look stylish but now I have a try and obtain carrier habit bags so the accomplishes more suitable for me.

✓ Actually, I prefer comfortable shoes, but when I was in my 20s, I used to wear fashionable shoes to look stylish. Now, I try to obtain carrier habit bags because they are more suitable for me.

'Prefer to comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer comfortable shoes'. 'A fashion shoes' is incorrect; 'fashionable shoes' is correct. The latter part is unclear and grammatically incorrect; rephrasing clarifies meaning.

× It helps me stay stay on my feet without pain.

✓ They help me stay on my feet without pain.

The pronoun 'It' is singular but refers to 'carrier habit bags' which is plural; 'They' is correct. Also, 'stay stay' is a repetition error.