Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant but could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add a supporting detail. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'shoes' multiple times.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase new pairs every few months to update my collection.

Gợi ý: Your answer is informative but a bit wordy and slightly unnatural. Use simpler, clearer language and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'new era' and focus on your personal experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it offers a wide range of styles and sizes, making it easier to find the perfect fit.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases ('sues' instead of 'shoes'). Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: I usually spend the most money on shoes because I prefer comfortable pairs that I can wear every day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words for coherence. Also, correct singular/plural agreement ('a comfortable shoes' should be 'comfortable shoes').

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because they suit my daily needs and match various outfits.

× Buying shoes online helps me choose from variety of options and choose my fit according to my needs.

✓ Buying shoes online helps me choose from a variety of options and select my fit according to my needs.

The phrase 'from variety of options' is missing the article 'a' before 'variety'. Also, to avoid repetition of 'choose', 'select' is used for better style and clarity.

× OK this may sound ridiculous but the most amount I spend my money on my outfit is for sues because I like the shoes that are comfy and helps me walk around for everyday purposes.

✓ OK this may sound ridiculous but the most amount I spend my money on my outfit is for shoes because I like the shoes that are comfy and help me walk around for everyday purposes.

The word 'sues' is a typo and should be 'shoes'. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'shoes'.

× I like the shoes that are comfy and helps me walk around for everyday purposes.

✓ I like the shoes that are comfy and help me walk around for everyday purposes.

The verb 'helps' does not agree with the plural subject 'shoes'. It should be 'help' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Well I love a mixture of both actually because having a comfortable shoes which are also fashionable helps me have the best of both worlds and it helps me for daily use and I can wear them with any outfits I like.

✓ Well I love a mixture of both actually because having comfortable shoes which are also fashionable helps me have the best of both worlds and it helps me for daily use and I can wear them with any outfits I like.

The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'comfortable shoes' without 'a'.