Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
Not really like it. Maybe twice a year. That's my frequency. I love sports shoes and I can wear it for very, very long time. It's usable. Nike. Nike.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yeah, definitely. We always buy some things like clothes, shoes on the Internet like Taobao and Pinduoduo is my favorite app because we often get the discount on the Internet.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
Maybe 100 or 200 renminbi for one shoes? That's my preferred price level. Thank you for listening.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
Definitely the convenient shoes. I prefer the sport shoes that I mentioned before. It's good for daily use and I can use it for a long time. That's my opinion.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和不完整句子。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，比如喜欢运动鞋的原因和品牌。
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy buying shoes and usually do it about twice a year. I prefer sports shoes because they are comfortable and durable. For example, I often buy Nike shoes since they last a long time.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯，避免重复“on the Internet”，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。可以具体说明为什么喜欢这些平台。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online using apps like Taobao and Pinduoduo because they offer great discounts. I find these platforms convenient and affordable for shopping.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应避免不必要的客套语“Thank you for listening”，并且句子结构应更完整自然。可以说明价格范围的原因。
Ví dụ: I usually spend around 100 to 200 renminbi on a pair of shoes because I prefer affordable yet good quality options.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 应使用更准确的词汇，如“comfortable”代替“convenient”，并用连接词使表达更连贯。可以具体说明为什么喜欢舒适鞋。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes, especially sports shoes, because they are suitable for daily use and last a long time.
Ngữ pháp
× Not really like it.
✓ I don't really like it.
句子缺少主语和助动词，导致结构不完整。应补充主语“I”和助动词“don't”构成完整句子。
× I love sports shoes and I can wear it for very, very long time.
✓ I love sports shoes and I can wear them for a very, very long time.
sports shoes是复数，代词应使用复数形式them，而不是it。
× It's usable.
✓ They are comfortable to wear.
“usable”不适合描述鞋子的舒适度，改用“comfortable to wear”更符合语境。
× We always buy some things like clothes, shoes on the Internet like Taobao and Pinduoduo is my favorite app because we often get the discount on the Internet.
✓ We always buy things like clothes and shoes on the Internet. Taobao and Pinduoduo are my favorite apps because we often get discounts online.
“shoes”是复数，前面应加and连接；“Taobao and Pinduoduo”是复数，应使用复数动词“are”；“discount”应使用复数“discounts”。
× Maybe 100 or 200 renminbi for one shoes?
✓ Maybe 100 or 200 renminbi for one pair of shoes.
“shoes”是复数，单数时应使用“a pair of shoes”。
× Definitely the convenient shoes.
✓ Definitely comfortable shoes.
“convenient”通常指方便的，描述鞋子应使用“comfortable”表示舒适。
× I prefer the sport shoes that I mentioned before.
✓ I prefer the sports shoes that I mentioned before.
“sports shoes”是固定搭配，需使用复数形式。
× It's good for daily use and I can use it for a long time.
✓ They are good for daily use and I can use them for a long time.
指代复数名词“shoes”，代词应使用复数形式“they”和“them”。
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