Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'UH' and ensure your sentences are concise and clear. Also, avoid redundancy; mentioning the library is convenient twice is unnecessary. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely visit the library because I prefer reading ebooks and online materials at home, which is more convenient for me. Additionally, there is a library near my home, but I find online resources easier to access.

Gợi ý: Good use of linking words and content. However, watch for subject-verb agreement errors, such as 'library also offer' should be 'library also offers'. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to summarise your points.

Ví dụ: I often use the library to access academic journals and books essential for my research projects. In addition, I sometimes attend workshops there, which are engaging and help me develop new skills. The library also offers a wide variety of books on different subjects, making it a valuable resource.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but watch for minor grammar mistakes like 'exploring different story' which should be 'exploring different stories'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I didn't go to the library much as a child because there wasn't one near my home. Instead, I preferred reading books at home where I could relax and take my time. Therefore, I often enjoyed exploring different stories on my own rather than going out to borrow books.

Gợi ý: Well-structured and coherent answer with good use of linking words. To improve, you could add a specific example or statistic to support your opinion and make your answer more convincing.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think many Chinese kids visit libraries these days. With the rise of digital technology like smartphones and tablets, children often prefer playing video games or browsing social media. However, some kids still enjoy visiting libraries to read books or study quietly, especially during weekends or school holidays.

× The library also offer a wide variety of books on different subjects.

✓ The library also offers a wide variety of books on different subjects.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'offers' instead of 'offer' to agree with the subject.