Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library recently and after quitting my job I think I want to spend the time productively, so I decided to went to the library as often as I want.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I always prepare for my PhD program application, such as spending time on refine my research proposal and searching for potential supervisors.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a kid, I often go to the library with my classmates. We always prepare our exam or finish our assignments there and and during summer vacation we can spend all day sitting there and reading the books which interest me, which interests us.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think most Chinese students, uh, always go to the libraries because, uh, the students are all under great academic pressure. Uh, they just need some, somewhere to searching for useful information.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中时态使用不准确,如“decided to went”应为“decided to go”,且句子结构较复杂,建议简化表达,避免语法错误,同时回答应更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have been going to the library often recently because I want to use my time productively after quitting my job.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“spending time on refine”应为“spending time refining”,建议注意动词形式的正确使用,同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually prepare for my PhD application by refining my research proposal and searching for potential supervisors.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态不一致,如“often go”应为“often went”,且句子重复且冗长,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library with my classmates to prepare for exams and finish assignments. During summer vacations, we spent whole days reading books that interested us.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有较多口头语“uh”,影响流畅度,且语法错误,如“to searching”应为“to search”,建议减少口头语,注意语法准确性,并使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think most Chinese students often go to libraries because they face great academic pressure and need a place to search for useful information.
× I decided to went to the library as often as I want.
✓ I decided to go to the library as often as I want.
这里的动词不定式to后面应该用动词原形go,而不是过去式went。动词不定式结构中动词不变形。
× such as spending time on refine my research proposal and searching for potential supervisors.
✓ such as spending time refining my research proposal and searching for potential supervisors.
介词on后面应该接动名词形式,refine应改为refining。
× I often go to the library recently
✓ I have been going to the library recently
recently表示最近一段时间,应该用现在完成进行时表示动作从过去持续到现在。
× I often go to the library with my classmates.
✓ I often went to the library with my classmates.
句子描述过去的情况,应该用过去时went而不是现在时go。
× We always prepare our exam or finish our assignments there
✓ We always prepared for our exams or finished our assignments there.
描述过去习惯动作,应该用过去时prepared和finished。
× reading the books which interest me, which interests us.
✓ reading the books which interest us.
前后代词指代不一致,应该统一为复数形式us,动词用复数形式interest。
× somewhere to searching for useful information.
✓ somewhere to search for useful information.
to后面应接动词原形search,而不是动名词searching。