Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structures and tenses. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: I don't go to the library very often nowadays. However, when I was at university, I used to visit the library on weekends because the books I needed for my studies were not available for purchase. Therefore, the library was essential for me to access those materials.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency by avoiding filler words and combining sentences with linking words. Also, be more specific about the types of novels or stories you enjoy to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Since reading is my hobby, I usually look for novels and short stories in the library. Whenever I find interesting books, I enjoy reading them because it helps improve my mood and relaxes me.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct past tense and clearer sentence structure. Avoid repetition and be concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in school, I often went to the library because some books I needed for my studies were not available for purchase. Therefore, I used the library to access those materials.

Gợi ý: Try to express uncertainty more naturally and complete your thoughts. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide clearer explanations with linking words.

Ví dụ: I'm not entirely sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, I read during my university studies that many Chinese children enjoy visiting libraries because they have extra lessons that encourage reading.

× Nowadays, not too much I go to library, but I vividly remember when I was studying in university, I used to go library on the weekends because all the books which uh, I do need for my study always not available in the market.

✓ Nowadays, I don't go to the library too much, but I vividly remember when I was studying at university, I used to go to the library on the weekends because all the books which I needed for my study were not always available in the market.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'in university' should be 'at university' to indicate attendance. The sentence also needed correction in verb tense and word order for clarity.

× As reading is my hobby so I like to read some novels, some stories. So whenever I go to library, I always uh find some interesting books and uh like to read them because uh, reading always helps me to uplift my mood.

✓ As reading is my hobby, I like to read some novels and stories. So whenever I go to the library, I always find some interesting books and like to read them because reading always helps me to uplift my mood.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. Also, unnecessary fillers and conjunctions were removed for clarity and correctness.

× When I was in school, I already discussed that I often go to the library because some sort of books which I need, which I needed for my study were not available in the market for purchase.

✓ When I was in school, I already mentioned that I often went to the library because some books which I needed for my study were not available in the market for purchase.

The phrase 'go to the library' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past context. 'Some sort of books' is awkward; 'some books' is clearer. 'Already discussed' is better as 'already mentioned' in this context.

× I am not pretty much sure that whether Chinese kids prefer to go library or not.

✓ I am not quite sure whether Chinese kids prefer to go to the library or not.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library'. Also, 'pretty much sure' is better expressed as 'quite sure'. The preposition 'to' is needed after 'go'.