Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I often go to the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment, which helps me concentrate better, especially when I need to prepare for exams or learn new knowledge. The library offers many useful resources and a peaceful atmosphere.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I have been a big fan of reading ever since I started go to the library. The library provides a quiet and comfortable environment, which helps me focus better on my studies. I usually spend time reading novels and academic books there, which also helps me relieve stress after a busy day.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I have been a big fan of going to the library ever since I was a kid. The library provides a quiet and comfortable environment which helps me focus on better in my study and I can reading some lovers and academic books which helps me relieve stress.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
To be honest I'm not so sure, but from what I can say from Chinese kids around me, they tend to choose go to the library because they want to learn more and improve their knowledge during their free time. Maybe for others they would probably prefer to play sports or spend time in the park to relax and have fun.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但有些重复,如“quiet and comfortable environment”出现两次。建议避免重复表达,简洁明了地说明理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit the library because it offers a peaceful setting and abundant resources that help me focus and prepare for exams effectively.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富,但存在语法错误(如“started go to”应为“started going to”),且部分内容重复。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I have loved reading since I started going to the library. Because it is quiet, I can concentrate well. Usually, I read novels and academic books, which also helps me relax after a busy day.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当(如“focus on better”,“reading some lovers”),且表达不够清晰。建议加强语法练习,使用正确词汇,并简洁表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved going to the library since I was a child because it is quiet and helps me concentrate. I used to read novels and academic books there to relax.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够自然,且有语法错误(如“choose go to”应为“choose to go to”)。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: I'm not entirely sure, but many Chinese kids I know go to the library to learn and improve their knowledge. Others might prefer playing sports or relaxing in the park during their free time.
× I have been a big fan of reading ever since I started go to the library.
✓ I have been a big fan of reading ever since I started going to the library.
动词start后面应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形。这里的go应改为going。
× they tend to choose go to the library because they want to learn more and improve their knowledge during their free time.
✓ they tend to choose going to the library because they want to learn more and improve their knowledge during their free time.
动词choose后面应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形。这里的go应改为going。
× The library provides a quiet and comfortable environment which helps me focus on better in my study and I can reading some lovers and academic books which helps me relieve stress.
✓ The library provides a quiet and comfortable environment which helps me focus better on my studies and I can read some novels and academic books which help me relieve stress.
1. focus后面搭配better on,顺序错误,应为focus better on。2. study应为复数形式studies,表示学习科目。3. can后面应接动词原形read,而非reading。4. lovers应为novels,拼写错误。5. which后面的动词helps应改为help,因为前面的books是复数。