Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Not much, but yes, I go to the library. I enjoy going there and I like that it is quiet.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually go to the library to read books. I usually go to the library to read books and novels. Also dramas. And I like literature. Yeah, that's it.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I I used to go to the library very often when I was a kid because I really enjoyed the that is that it is a peaceful place. I was learning from the stories or novels I read.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I don't know so much about Chinese kids, but I would say that Chinese kids are so intelligent and they learn too much and try hard. Also I'd say yes, I think so. They should be going to the library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to give a more direct and complete answer with clear reasons. Avoid short or vague phrases like 'Not much, but yes'. Instead, say how often you go and why you like it, using linking words to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library occasionally because I enjoy the quiet atmosphere, which helps me concentrate on my studies.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the same idea and try to give a more structured answer. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples of what you read.
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read various books, including novels and dramas, because I have a strong interest in literature.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid hesitation or repetition.
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library very often when I was a kid because it was a peaceful place where I could learn a lot from the stories and novels I read.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Try to answer more directly and avoid vague or uncertain phrases like 'I don't know so much'. Give your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples, using linking words for coherence.
Ví dụ: Although I am not sure, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are hardworking and eager to learn new things.
× I I used to go to the library very often when I was a kid because I really enjoyed the that is that it is a peaceful place.
✓ I used to go to the library very often when I was a kid because I really enjoyed that it was a peaceful place.
The sentence contains a repeated pronoun 'I I' which is incorrect and redundant. Also, the phrase 'the that is that it is' is confusing and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'that it was' to correctly express the past tense and the reason for enjoyment.