LibraryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course I go to the library because I really want to improve my English speaking and English grammar. So I go to the library around 3 or 4 times a week.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I usually study English or, uh, maybe listen to radio files of, uh, English, uh, lessons, you know, uh, the environment of their library is really, uh, quiet and it's better than the house to focus on the studying. So I prefer to go to that place.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to library because my parents didn't told me it's better to go there and study lessons. So no I don't have any experience in doing.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I speculate yes because the Chinese people grew up with studying books and their parents tell them to go to the library and how to be a better person by studying or learning things. So of course they go to the library.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating "English" twice and try to combine ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your reasons and frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library about three or four times a week because I want to improve my English speaking skills and grammar.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Try to reduce filler words like "uh" and "you know" to sound more fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, explain what you do first, then why you prefer the library.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually study English and listen to audio lessons. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better than at home, so I prefer studying there.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct past tense forms and avoid repeating negatives. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by a reason using linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because my parents never encouraged me to study there.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Avoid vague words like "speculate" and be more confident in your opinion. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study and believe that learning helps them become better individuals.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to library because my parents didn't told me it's better to go there and study lessons.

Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to the library because my parents didn't tell me it's better to go there and study lessons.

The verb 'didn't' is already in the past tense, so the main verb following it should be in the base form. 'Didn't told' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't tell'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to library because my parents didn't told me it's better to go there and study lessons.

Honestly no, as a child I didn't go to the library because my parents didn't tell me it's better to go there and study lessons.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

Sentence structure errors

× So no I don't have any experience in doing.

So no, I don't have any experience doing that.

The phrase 'experience in doing' is awkward and incomplete. It is better to say 'experience doing that' to clearly express the idea. Also, a comma after 'So no' improves clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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