Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, there is no library near my home.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually buy some books for my children in the library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library when I'm a kid. When I was a kid, there is so many children.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think they're not because we can buy some book to home and read books online.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短且缺乏细节,建议增加原因和个人感受,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home, so I usually read books online instead.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够丰富,图书馆通常是借阅而非购买书籍,建议描述更多活动细节并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I usually borrow books for my children in the library because it offers a wide selection, and sometimes we attend storytime sessions there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 时态使用错误且表达不清晰,建议使用正确时态并补充具体经历和感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. It was always crowded with many children, and I enjoyed reading storybooks there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不够准确且缺少连接词,建议改进语法并详细说明原因。
Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because many families prefer buying books to read at home or accessing books online for convenience.
× No, there is no library near my home.
✓ No, there isn't a library near my home.
此处是否定句,'there is no library'应改为'there isn't a library',更符合英语否定表达习惯。
× I usually buy some books for my children in the library.
✓ I usually borrow some books for my children in the library.
通常在图书馆是借书而不是买书,'buy'用词不当,应改为'borrow'。
× Yes, I often go to the library when I'm a kid.
✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.
描述过去习惯动作时,动词应使用过去时,'go'应改为'went','I'm'应改为'was'。
× When I was a kid, there is so many children.
✓ When I was a kid, there were so many children.
描述过去时态,'there is'应改为过去时'there were',且'many'后应接复数名词'children'。
× I think they're not because we can buy some book to home and read books online.
✓ I think they don't often go because we can buy some books to take home and read books online.
'they're not'用法错误,应改为'they don't often go';'some book'应为复数'some books';'to home'应改为'to take home'。