Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library because I'm a student and I need to study at the library to achieve good academic performance.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually study the my major courses and sometimes I may read books and discuss with and discuss with my partners.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Of course not. When I was a kid I studied in a rural area where there was no library and it's difficult for me to go to the library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, in our city, parents usually give library card to their children and encourage them to study in library to improve their grades.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为直接,但语言稍显重复和不够自然。建议避免重复表达“library”,并用更自然的表达方式说明去图书馆的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I frequently visit the library since it provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate on my studies and improve my academic results.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually study subjects related to my major, and sometimes I read books or discuss topics with my classmates to deepen my understanding.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但句子结构较简单,且时态使用不够准确。建议使用更丰富的句型,并注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have the chance to visit a library as a child because I grew up in a rural area where libraries were not available, making it hard for me to access such resources.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中缺少冠词,表达略显生硬。建议注意冠词使用,并丰富细节,使回答更具体自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, many children in my city have library cards given by their parents, who encourage them to spend time there studying and borrowing books to enhance their academic performance.
× I usually study the my major courses and sometimes I may read books and discuss with and discuss with my partners.
✓ I usually study my major courses and sometimes I may read books and discuss with my partners.
句子中出现了多余的冠词“the”和重复的短语“and discuss with”,应去除多余部分,使句子更简洁通顺。
× parents usually give library card to their children and encourage them to study in library to improve their grades.
✓ parents usually give library cards to their children and encourage them to study in the library to improve their grades.
“give library card to”中“library card”应为复数形式“library cards”,且“study in library”缺少定冠词“the”,应为“study in the library”。