Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always go to the library because I'm really like read book, so I think go to library is very meaningful.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I always reading books and then I always communicate with my parents and my classmates to exchange our feeling about new books.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Now in my life, I always go to the zoo and go to the swimming pool. I don't like read book in my child.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents always taught taught their children. Reading book is very important.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达喜欢去图书馆的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books. I find it a meaningful place to learn and relax.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态错误和表达不流畅,且内容重复。建议使用正确的时态,简洁表达主要活动,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually read books in the library. Besides, I sometimes discuss new books with my parents and classmates to share our thoughts.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答偏离问题,且语法错误较多。建议直接回答是否去过图书馆,并说明原因,避免跑题。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't often go to the library when I was a child. I preferred outdoor activities like visiting the zoo and swimming.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇,表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,避免重复,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: I think Chinese children often visit libraries because their parents emphasize the importance of reading for learning and personal growth.
× Yes, I always go to the library because I'm really like read book, so I think go to library is very meaningful.
✓ Yes, I always go to the library because I really like reading books, so I think going to the library is very meaningful.
动词like后面接动名词reading而不是动词原形read;go to library前应加动名词going表示动作。
× Yes, I always go to the library because I'm really like read book, so I think go to library is very meaningful.
✓ Yes, I always go to the library because I really like reading books, so I think going to the library is very meaningful.
book应为复数books,因为表示泛指多本书。
× I always reading books and then I always communicate with my parents and my classmates to exchange our feeling about new books.
✓ I am always reading books and then I always communicate with my parents and my classmates to exchange our feelings about new books.
always后面用现在进行时am reading表示经常做的动作;feeling应为复数feelings。
× I always reading books and then I always communicate with my parents and my classmates to exchange our feeling about new books.
✓ I am always reading books and then I always communicate with my parents and my classmates to exchange our feelings about new books.
feeling应为复数feelings,因为是多种感受。
× I don't like read book in my child.
✓ I didn't like reading books in my childhood.
描述过去的习惯用过去时didn't like;child应为childhood表示童年;read后接动名词reading。
× I don't like read book in my child.
✓ I didn't like reading books in my childhood.
book应为复数books,表示泛指多本书。
× I don't like read book in my child.
✓ I didn't like reading books in my childhood.
描述过去的习惯用过去时didn't like。
× Now in my life, I always go to the zoo and go to the swimming pool.
✓ Now in my life, I always go to the zoo and the swimming pool.
句子时态无误,但后文与前文时态不符,需注意时态一致。
× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents always taught taught their children.
✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents always teach their children.
always表示习惯性动作,谓语动词应使用一般现在时teach,而不是过去时taught。
× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents always taught taught their children.
✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese parents always teach their children.
动词taught重复出现,应删除多余的一个。