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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often go to my university's libraries when in my examination. I feel like study in library make me more concentrated on my test than study at home and I usually go to library with my friends.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

As I said before, I often go to library to study during my exams. So of course when I go to library, I I studied my most, uh, my favorite subject when I study in library was some subjects that need focus and silence.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Actually, I lived in a province next to the capital city in Vietnam. So in that city we do not have like a Public Library for everyone to come and study. So I do not go to library. I didn't go to library when I was.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I'm actually not living in Chinese so I don't know much about that idea, but I'm living in the country next to country and I next to Chinese and I can say that kids often go to library if they living in major cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I feel like study in library make me more concentrated", bạn nên nói "I feel that studying in the library helps me concentrate better."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to my university's library during exams because I feel that studying there helps me concentrate better than at home. Also, I usually go with my friends, which makes studying more enjoyable.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "I usually study subjects that require a lot of focus and silence, such as mathematics or literature, when I am in the library."

Ví dụ: I usually study subjects that require a lot of focus and silence, such as mathematics or literature, when I am in the library. This environment helps me concentrate better during exams.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời và sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no public library in my hometown."

Ví dụ: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there was no public library in my hometown, which is a province near the capital city of Vietnam.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói "I don't live in China, so I'm not sure, but I think kids in major cities like Hanoi often go to the library."

Ví dụ: I don't live in China, so I'm not sure about that. However, I believe that kids in major cities like Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City often go to the library to study.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I often go to my university's libraries when in my examination.

Yes, I often go to my university's library when I have an examination.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' because usually a university has one main library. Also, 'when in my examination' is incorrect; it should be 'when I have an examination' to indicate the time correctly.

Verb + -ing form

× I feel like study in library make me more concentrated on my test than study at home

I feel like studying in the library makes me more concentrated on my test than studying at home

After 'feel like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'study' becomes 'studying'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'studying in the library'. 'Study at home' also needs to be 'studying at home' for parallel structure.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I usually go to library with my friends.

I usually go to the library with my friends.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× As I said before, I often go to library to study during my exams.

As I said before, I often go to the library to study during my exams.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' to specify the particular place.

Past tense issue

× So of course when I go to library, I I studied my most, uh, my favorite subject when I study in library was some subjects that need focus and silence.

So of course when I go to the library, I study mostly my favorite subjects that need focus and silence.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the question is about usual actions, present tense 'study' is appropriate. Also, 'I studied my most' is unclear and corrected to 'I study mostly my favorite subjects'. The article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× So I do not go to library.

So I do not go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' to indicate a specific place.

Past tense issue

× I didn't go to library when I was.

I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The sentence is incomplete and missing 'a kid' to complete the thought. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'. The past tense 'didn't go' is correct here.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I'm actually not living in Chinese so I don't know much about that idea, but I'm living in the country next to country and I next to Chinese

I'm actually not living in China so I don't know much about that, but I live in a country next to China

'Chinese' is an adjective or noun for people, the country name is 'China'. 'Living in the country next to country' is incorrect; it should be 'a country next to China'. Also, 'I'm living' is better as 'I live' for a general fact.

Singular and plural issue

× I can say that kids often go to library if they living in major cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City.

I can say that kids often go to the library if they live in major cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Also, 'they living' should be 'they live' to match subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

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