Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Actually no, because my home is not nearby library, so actually I will read book just at home, it's very convenient.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I will go to find some books I that I don't have and burden to home and I will I will study.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like go to the library when I was a kid. When I was a child, my friend my parents is very busy so.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, we often go to the library because we have many homework to do and we have prepare many so we will have many time in library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够自然,句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并用连词连接原因,避免重复。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home. Instead, I prefer reading books at home since it's more convenient.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法错误较多,表达混乱。建议先明确回答,再用连词补充细节,注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to find books that I don't have at home. Then, I borrow them and study there quietly.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重,句子不连贯。建议先直接回答问题,然后用连词补充原因,注意时态和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to the library when I was a kid because my parents were very busy and I needed a quiet place to read.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清,语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并用连词连接原因,注意单复数和时态。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they have a lot of homework and need a quiet place to study.
× Actually no, because my home is not nearby library, so actually I will read book just at home, it's very convenient.
✓ Actually no, because my home is not near the library, so actually I will read books just at home, it's very convenient.
这里的“library”前缺少冠词“the”,且“book”应为复数形式“books”,因为通常阅读不止一本书。
× Actually no, because my home is not nearby library, so actually I will read book just at home, it's very convenient.
✓ Actually no, because my home is not near the library, so actually I will read books just at home, it's very convenient.
“nearby”是副词,不能直接修饰名词,应该用介词短语“near the library”。
× Actually no, because my home is not nearby library, so actually I will read book just at home, it's very convenient.
✓ Actually no, because my home is not near the library, so actually I read books just at home, it's very convenient.
这里描述的是习惯动作,应该用一般现在时而非将来时“will read”。
× I will go to find some books I that I don't have and burden to home and I will I will study.
✓ I go to find some books that I don't have and bring them home, and I study.
描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时,而非将来时“will”。
× I will go to find some books I that I don't have and burden to home and I will I will study.
✓ I go to find some books that I don't have and bring them home, and I study.
“I that I don't have”结构混乱,应去掉多余的“I”,并且“burden”用错,应为“bring”。
× I will go to find some books I that I don't have and burden to home and I will I will study.
✓ I go to find some books that I don't have and bring them home, and I study.
“burden to home”用词错误,应为“bring them home”,表示带回家。
× Yes, I like go to the library when I was a kid.
✓ Yes, I liked going to the library when I was a kid.
描述过去习惯动作时,动词应使用过去式“liked”,且“go”应改为动名词“going”。
× Yes, I like go to the library when I was a kid.
✓ Yes, I liked going to the library when I was a kid.
“like go”结构不正确,应该用“liked going”表示过去喜欢做某事。
× When I was a child, my friend my parents is very busy so.
✓ When I was a child, my parents were very busy.
主语“my parents”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”,且句子结构需简化。
× Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
✓ Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
该句无语法错误,无需修改。
× Yes, we often go to the library because we have many homework to do and we have prepare many so we will have many time in library.
✓ Yes, we often go to the library because we have a lot of homework to do and we have to prepare a lot, so we will spend a lot of time in the library.
“homework”是不可数名词,不能用“many”,应使用“a lot of”;“prepare many”结构不完整,应改为“have to prepare a lot”;“many time”应为“a lot of time”;“in library”前应加冠词“the”。
× Yes, we often go to the library because we have many homework to do and we have prepare many so we will have many time in library.
✓ Yes, we often go to the library because we have a lot of homework to do and we have to prepare a lot, so we will spend a lot of time in the library.
“in library”缺少冠词,应为“in the library”。
× Yes, we often go to the library because we have many homework to do and we have prepare many so we will have many time in library.
✓ Yes, we often go to the library because we have a lot of homework to do and we have to prepare a lot, so we will spend a lot of time in the library.
“we have prepare many”缺少情态动词“have to”,表示必须做某事。