Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and finish your sentences fully.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually use electronic books and online resources like Google Scholar. However, I sometimes visit my university library to study quietly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a full sentence with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually search the archives because my PhD research focuses on historical topics, so I need original documents.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clarify your points with linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there was no library in my city, so I didn't have access to one.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question, then explain your opinion with clear reasons and linking words. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I think libraries are less popular nowadays because many people prefer using the internet for information.

× No, I don't go to the library too much because nowadays people have access electronic books and also Google scholars and Google libraries.

✓ No, I don't go to the library too much because nowadays people have access to electronic books and also Google Scholar and Google Libraries.

The phrase 'have access' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'Google scholars' should be 'Google Scholar' as it is a proper noun. Correct preposition use improves sentence clarity.

× Also my university has a library and I often.

✓ Also, my university has a library and I often go there.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb after 'I often'. Adding 'go there' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× When I go in the library, I. Usually find the archive because my PhD series also is historical topics.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually find the archive because my PhD series is also on historical topics.

The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place. Also, 'I.' is a typo and should be 'I'. The phrase 'my PhD series also is historical topics' is awkward; 'is also on historical topics' is clearer.

× No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because in my city we have not a library and unfortunately we have not access up.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because in my city we did not have a library and unfortunately we did not have access to one.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Have not' should be 'did not have' to match past tense. Also, 'have not access up' is incorrect; it should be 'have access to one'.

× No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because in my city we have not a library and unfortunately we have not access up.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because in my city we did not have a library and unfortunately we did not have access to one.

The phrase 'have access' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. 'Access up' is incorrect.

× Oh, oh, it's very specific question because I have not more information about Chinese kids go in the library on don't go in the library.

✓ Oh, oh, it's a very specific question because I do not have much information about whether Chinese kids go to the library or do not go to the library.

The phrase 'go in the library' should be 'go to the library'. Also, 'have not more information' is incorrect; 'do not have much information' is correct.

× I think library is not popular institution nowadays because all country we.

✓ I think the library is not a popular institution nowadays because in all countries we...

The sentence is incomplete but 'library' needs the definite article 'the' and 'popular institution' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'all country' should be 'all countries'. The preposition 'in' is needed before 'all countries'.