Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有点冗长且有些表达不够自然。建议你简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。例如，可以先直接回答是否经常去图书馆，然后简要说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library every day during university because it offers a quiet and comfortable environment that helps me focus on my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不够清晰，表达有些混乱。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且分清时间顺序，简洁表达你的活动内容。

Ví dụ: In the morning, I usually practice intensive listening and reading to improve my English. In the afternoon and evening, I review my professional courses and prepare for upcoming exams.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简单明了的句子说明原因，避免使用不准确的表达。

Ví dụ: Not really. When I was a kid, I was very interested in cartoons and spent most of my free time watching them at home because I was busy with homework after school.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点，注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese kids go to the library after school because they like reading various books. For example, they enjoy storybooks and cartoons, which help create a quiet and enjoyable reading environment.

× I think the library can provide pleasant and eco friendly environment for my study

✓ I think the library can provide a pleasant and eco-friendly environment for my study

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'environment'. Also, 'eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× I think it's a means of tranquility to stay calm and be tentative to achieve my academic goals.

✓ I think it's a means of tranquility to stay calm and be patient to achieve my academic goals.

The word 'tentative' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'patient' to express the idea of being calm and enduring while working towards goals.

× Many things I will do such as in the morning I will practice my intensive listening and intensive reading for my English study progress, and in the afternoon and evening I will review my professional lesson and skills and some examinations I have preferred for them in my future study.

✓ I will do many things, such as practicing intensive listening and intensive reading for my English study progress in the morning, and reviewing my professional lessons, skills, and some examinations I have prepared for in my future study during the afternoon and evening.

The original sentence has awkward word order and unclear phrasing. Reordering the sentence and clarifying the activities improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually, not so bad when I was young.

✓ Actually, it was not so bad when I was young.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'it was' completes the sentence and correctly uses past tense.

× For example, many of them I practice interesting levels through my stories and cartoon books and that provides a quiet and pleasant environment, which makes reading more enjoyable and pleasant for them.

✓ For example, many of them practice interesting levels through stories and cartoon books, and that provides a quiet and pleasant environment, which makes reading more enjoyable and pleasant for them.

The phrase 'many of them I practice' incorrectly uses the pronoun 'I'. It should be 'many of them practice' to correctly refer to the subject 'many of them'.