Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I go to the library twice a week.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I often read some books interesting and do my work in the library.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because my mother is a teacher. When I was a kid, she went to the library to deal with her teaching work with me.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because there is intense competition in school. They usually spend a lot of time studying and doing research there to improve their grades.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍微丰富内容,使回答更自然流畅。比如说明去图书馆的原因或喜欢的活动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I go to the library twice a week because I enjoy reading and it provides a quiet environment for studying.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然,语法错误影响表达。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually read interesting books and do my work there because it helps me concentrate better.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答有些重复且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,突出重点,并用连接词连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother, who is a teacher, often took me to the library when she worked on her teaching materials.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但可以用更多连接词使表达更流畅。词汇使用较好。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because of the intense competition in schools. Therefore, they spend a lot of time studying and doing research there to improve their grades.
× I often read some books interesting and do my work in the library.
✓ I often read some interesting books and do my work in the library.
形容词修饰名词时,形容词应放在名词前面,不能放在名词后面。这里应将 'interesting' 放在 'books' 前面,形成 'interesting books'。
× When I was a kid, she went to the library to deal with her teaching work with me.
✓ When I was a kid, she went to the library to deal with her teaching work.
句中 'deal with her teaching work with me' 结构不正确,表达不清。应去掉 'with me',因为母亲去图书馆处理教学工作时,学生不应作为动作的伴随者。
× Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because there is intense competition in school.
✓ Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because there is intense competition at school.
介词 'in' 用于表示某物内部,而 'at school' 更常用于表示在学校环境或场所,表达更地道。这里应使用 'at school'。