Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually go to the library because I think the library is a quiet place where I can study hard for the examination and I like reading books.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Most of the time I prefer reading books in the library instead of studying because I think the library is a real place for reading.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I never went to the library when I was young because I prefer playing basketball and playing the guitar at home rather than studying. I think I was a lazy boy so I never get good scores at school.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think they hardly go to library because they maybe prefer reading ebooks on Internet and I think for kids playing is more important than reading.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但句子较长且有些重复。建议简化表达,避免冗余,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on studying. Besides, I enjoy reading books there.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较单一,缺少具体细节。建议增加具体的活动描述,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Usually, I prefer reading books in the library rather than studying because it provides a peaceful environment. Moreover, I can find many interesting books there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性,避免自我评价过于负面,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library because I enjoyed playing basketball and guitar at home. As a result, I didn't focus much on studying.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,缺少连接词,内容较笼统。建议使用更准确的表达,增加连接词,并提供具体原因。
Ví dụ: I believe Chinese kids rarely go to the library because they prefer reading ebooks online. Furthermore, many children think playing is more important than reading.
× I think I was a lazy boy so I never get good scores at school.
✓ I think I was a lazy boy so I never got good scores at school.
这里的动作发生在过去,应该使用过去时态。'get' 应改为过去式 'got'。
× I think they hardly go to library because they maybe prefer reading ebooks on Internet and I think for kids playing is more important than reading.
✓ I think they hardly go to the library because they maybe prefer reading ebooks on the Internet and I think for kids playing is more important than reading.
'library' 和 'Internet' 前面需要加定冠词 'the',因为这里指特定的图书馆和互联网。