Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because I'm not very fond of reading books. However, during college, I used to visit the library to study and complete assignments." This is more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because I'm not very fond of reading books. However, during college, I used to visit the library to study and complete assignments.

Gợi ý: Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar for naturalness. For example, "When I visit the library, I usually do my assignments and study because it is a peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate better than studying outside."

Ví dụ: When I visit the library, I usually do my assignments and study because it is a peaceful environment, which helps me concentrate better than studying outside.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and improve sentence flow. For example, "No, I did not go to the library as a child because my school did not have one. Therefore, I was not familiar with libraries and only read my textbooks."

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library as a child because my school did not have one. Therefore, I was not familiar with libraries and only read my textbooks.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and provide a more confident and structured answer. For example, "I believe many Chinese children do go to libraries because libraries are common in most countries, including China."

Ví dụ: I believe many Chinese children do go to libraries because libraries are common in most countries, including China.

× No, I often don't go to library.

✓ No, I often don't go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× However, when I was studying in college, I used to go to library to study and do my assignment rather than reading books.

✓ However, when I was studying in college, I used to go to the library to study and do my assignments rather than reading books.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the general meaning of multiple tasks.

× When I visit library, it's only for doing my assignment and studying because it is peaceful environment and it helps me to concentrate on my work rather than rather than doing in outside of the place.

✓ When I visit the library, it's only for doing my assignments and studying because it is a peaceful environment and it helps me to concentrate on my work rather than doing it outside.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments'. 'Peaceful environment' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. The phrase 'doing in outside of the place' is awkward and corrected to 'doing it outside' for clarity and correctness.

× No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid. Uh, the reason behind this is I was studying in a school which has no library, so I was quite not, I was quite unknown about the library, but I you I only used to read the subjects book.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid. Uh, the reason behind this is I was studying in a school which had no library, so I was quite unaware of the library, but I only used to read the subject books.

The verb tense 'has' should be past tense 'had' to match the past context. 'Quite unknown about' is incorrect; 'quite unaware of' is appropriate. 'Subjects book' should be plural 'subject books' to indicate multiple books.

× When I visit library, it's only for doing my assignment and studying because it is peaceful environment and it helps me to concentrate on my work rather than rather than doing in outside of the place.

✓ When I visit the library, it's only for doing my assignments and studying because it is a peaceful environment and it helps me to concentrate on my work rather than doing it outside.

The phrase 'doing in outside of the place' is grammatically incorrect and awkward. It should be corrected to 'doing it outside' to properly use the verb + -ing form and prepositions.

× ...but I you I only used to read the subjects book.

✓ ...but I only used to read the subject books.

The phrase 'I you I' is incorrect and likely a typographical error. It should be corrected to 'I only' to maintain proper pronoun usage and sentence clarity.