Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammatical errors, such as missing articles and repeated words.

Ví dụ: I don't usually go to the library because I prefer buying books. However, sometimes I visit it to find books that are hard to purchase elsewhere.

Gợi ý: Use linking words to connect your ideas and vary your sentence structures. Also, include articles like 'the' before 'library' for natural English usage.

Ví dụ: When I go to the library, I usually look for books that are hard to find or not available for sale. Additionally, I sometimes visit just to enjoy the quiet environment.

Gợi ý: Pay attention to verb tenses and article usage. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be more concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Unfortunately, the library in my hometown was quite small and had few books. Therefore, as a kid, I rarely went there because I didn't have the habit of reading.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and repeated words. Structure your answer clearly with linking words. Also, complete your sentences fully to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure if I can answer for all Chinese kids, but in my opinion, going to the library depends more on the habits instilled by parents rather than nationality or race.

× I don't usually go to library as I prefer buying books instead of going to library, but sometimes I do go there to to get some books which is difficult to buy outside.

✓ I don't usually go to the library as I prefer buying books instead of going to the library, but sometimes I do go there to get some books which are difficult to buy outside.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect. Also, 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I don't usually go to library as I prefer buying books instead of going to library, but sometimes I do go there to to get some books which is difficult to buy outside.

✓ I don't usually go to the library as I prefer buying books instead of going to the library, but sometimes I do go there to get some books which are difficult to buy outside.

The subject 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× When I go to library, I will usually look for the book which is hard to find outside or which is not available for sale.

✓ When I go to the library, I will usually look for the book which is hard to find outside or which is not available for sale.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× Sometimes I go to library just to enjoy the quiet environment there.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library just to enjoy the quiet environment there.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× As a kid, I rarely go to the library as I do not have the habit of reading at the young age.

✓ As a kid, I rarely went to the library as I did not have the habit of reading at a young age.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in the past tense: 'go' to 'went' and 'do not have' to 'did not have'. Also, 'at the young age' should be 'at a young age' for natural expression.

× As a kid, I rarely go to the library as I do not have the habit of reading at the young age.

✓ As a kid, I rarely went to the library as I did not have the habit of reading at a young age.

The phrase 'at the young age' is unnatural; 'at a young age' is the correct expression.